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Rope around my neck, I fall, waiting for blackness. Bliss. Eternal sleep.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/7/2014 5:43:00 PM
A belated welcome to the soup, I have enjoyed reading all of your posted pieces.
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Date: 5/6/2014 7:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Rick
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Date: 5/5/2014 1:29:00 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Rick :) - I choose your first deep and well written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/5/2014 11:39:00 AM
This is more like Senryu, but what the hell, I like it. Congrats on the selection. daver
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Date: 4/29/2014 4:44:00 PM
Hi all. Thank you very much for your comments about my work! I am really pleased to receive such a warm welcome to PoetrySoup, and will be posting some more of my work within the next couple of hours. I figure it is good to show different styles from the word Go, so that people can get a feel for how I work... Once again, thanks! I feel like I'm going to fit right in here.
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Date: 4/29/2014 4:31:00 PM
Rick, wow,, that's a hard fall... Wow, did you set yourself to feel this way..., your first poem was enjoyable. , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 4/29/2014 3:36:00 PM
ooh deep and dark and so sad! Hugs jan x
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Date: 4/29/2014 2:48:00 PM
Rick, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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