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Susan Lawrence

Sweat of life’; opening words of candour
Ushering a magic show to follow
She burst forth in delight, of love fervour
Adoring oneness, within heart mellow
Name of the poem, ‘elevating heartLaying low, she has posted six so far
‘And cupping my heart gently’ Gods love starts
We behold her divine play from afar
Resonation with euphoria clear
Enlivened by the throb of bliss within
Nectar elixirous open hearts spears
Canvas then coloured by love rendition
Entrée of poet, bright with elation

06-January-2021

Acrostic syllabic rhyme 
written for ‘capture the essence’ poetry contest
sponsored by Margarita Lillico

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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