Survive

blackness drowns you
suffocates you slowly
creeps in
seeps in 
drowns your heart
kills your soul
your an empty shell
never to feel again
wondering through life
empty and soulless
sometimes its the only way to survive
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Hall Mad Poet Avatar
July 28, 2010 at 2:35 PM
Welcome to the soup. I've been there emotionally so I can realte to that Excellent poen
Nandy Avatar
July 28, 2010 at 2:34 AM
Very well expressed young lady ! -Raj
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