Survival Lives in a Long Shadow

Written on 6th October, 2025 Placed 1st in: Long Shadows Poetry Contest by Craig Cornish. Placed 7th in: 2025 Poetry Marathon Mile 22 by Mark Toney. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
The lone street lamp stood a meter away, a long shadow stretched from its foot to my feet and beyond—into endless darkness, where owls howl in unity, their songs the only rhythm the night danced to. The emptiness that greeted my first day on the street was ubiquitous and ominous— fear and loneliness were luminous on its belly. Yet my resolve to survive burned like fire in my eyes. The street—like it or not—had to swallow me whole. My new home would be roofless, without bricks. Life must move with me from a house of no love to dwell where my heart lies and my feet are planted. It must learn to inhabit a darkness that's oblivious of fear or despair. Life, too, must learn to feed a hungry belly and a thirsty throat with strength forged in lack. It must grow used to the long shadow~ of this lone street lamp, for somewhere in its long gut lies all I need to survive. So let its rays pierce deeper into my being— let it know, without being told, that I am clinging to it for survival.
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Ashley Avatar
November 2, 2025 at 8:17 AM
Dear Maclawrence, your poem is potent in its poignant and palpable imagery where one feels the loss of everything, physically and emotionally. The struggle is real. I adore your ingenious title too, that sets the tone for your impressive poem. Congratulations for your success in Mark's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Famuyiwa Avatar
November 2, 2025 at 8:31 AM
Susan, thanks for appreciating the efforts put into imagining the poem and penning it.
Toney Avatar
October 22, 2025 at 11:22 AM
Maclawrence, you confront homelessness using the shadow of a street lamp as a metaphor for endurance and resilience. “It must grow used to the long shadow~ of this lone street lamp, for somewhere in its long gut lies all I need to survive.” Congratulations on your top 10 win on Mile 22 of my 2025 Poetry Marathon Contest. Keep your running shoes on, because Mile 23 has already started. Only 4 more miles to go before the Qualifiers’ Final Placement contest!
Famuyiwa Avatar
October 22, 2025 at 11:59 AM
Thanks for the honour Mark.
Cornish Avatar
October 9, 2025 at 10:52 AM
Exceptional writing my friend and a perfect example of "showing" - you created a mood without using superfluous modifiers - special writing!
Famuyiwa Avatar
October 9, 2025 at 1:51 PM
I am very grateful for this Craig.
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