Surrounding Sky, For Lovers Only

Surrounding Sky

Only you, know the sounds of oars 
in the starlit summer lake.
The moonlit waters, when the heavens
your hearts did suddenly take.

Those most tender soft kisses that
were innocent bound.
Whilst an unknown bird, flew over the
bow, not making one sound.

A picture in time, that God fashioned
just for you.
An eternal, summers’ portrait that was
created for only you to view.

                     
                     11/29/2021


      ~Dedicated to Jim and Maggie~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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November 30, 2021 at 2:58 PM
Beautiful Pangie. Special moments for just the two. Great stuff. God Bless and stay well my friend. JB
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December 7, 2021 at 3:36 PM
Judy, Maggie died a week after I wrote this. I am Devastated. Lim died 20 years ago Pangie
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December 3, 2021 at 1:04 PM
Thanks, Judy. God Bless
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November 30, 2021 at 11:37 AM
Hello Panagkota, being in a row boat or canoe on the lake a couple in love makes a lovely romantic scene. Hugs.
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November 30, 2021 at 3:50 PM
HelloPanagiota, you are welcome Panagiota. Yes it does sound romantic. Your welcome. Darlene xoxo
Romios Avatar
November 30, 2021 at 12:10 PM
Darlene , how right you are! We were very young. So it was romantic.the moon would reflect on the lake. Wow~ Wow! I took a wonderful train ride to my friends-summer home. Summer was forever sun, fuun and romance. Thank you. Panagiota xoxo
Wolf Avatar
November 30, 2021 at 11:34 AM
Oh, there's nothing like the sound of oars dipping into a clear, calm lake on a moonlit night. About as romantic as it gets for this old rowboater! :) gw
Romios Avatar
November 30, 2021 at 12:02 PM
Rowboats are just the sweetest ways to sail into love. I spent summers at Lake Como or Lake Geneva...what innocent fun and joy. We drove speedboats in-the day...fished, swam, cooked oudoors. Idyllic, it was, Gershon. And bless you for visiting... panagiota xoxo
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November 30, 2021 at 9:44 AM
Such a romantic picture you have painted with your poetic pen ~ a delight to read dear Panagiota - thank you... with love and hugs Ann xx
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November 30, 2021 at 9:58 AM
Ann, I shall always be a romantic, till the day I leave the planet. I do my best and compare my poetry to no other person. Each has their own gift. Thank you. Love from Across the Pond, Pangiota xoxo
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November 30, 2021 at 7:59 AM
Romanticism at its best, dearest Panagiota! Be blessed!
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November 30, 2021 at 8:38 AM
Thank you, thank you! Glad you are better. I am in bed with a broken thigh and knee joint. Was in hospital 21 days. Close to six hour surgery. God is healing me, my friend, Happy Holidays Pangie xoxo
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November 30, 2021 at 6:18 AM
Beautiful picture, Pangie and romantic
Romios Avatar
November 30, 2021 at 8:34 AM
Hi Andrea, so grateful for your comment. Love, panagiota xoxo
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