Surrounded By Peace





Just want to slip into a foggy darkness,
And let it envelop my soul.

Feeling its moistness wrapping me whole.
Finding myself in a magical forest in spring.

Just lying serenely on verdant, peace- filled grasslings
Tears of joy,fall... watching the clouds, simply meandering.

              

                March 11, 2020
                   4:30am PST

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Gilmour Avatar
March 13, 2020 at 6:59 AM
Wow, Panagiota, your imagery transports me to Shangri-la and I never want to return... With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Romios Avatar
March 13, 2020 at 7:46 AM
Hi Ann! Love your description of this... Shangri-La. Wow! I think you see my soul.... Merci with hugs. Panagiota xx
Andresen Avatar
March 11, 2020 at 2:31 PM
- Sounds relaxing, Panagiota :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Romios Avatar
March 11, 2020 at 3:05 PM
Hi Anne-Lise...I do agree with you...I can even smell the grass.))) Panagiota xx
Cunningham Avatar
March 11, 2020 at 11:19 AM
A place to float away and just enjoy the peace. Tom
Romios Avatar
March 11, 2020 at 12:07 PM
Yes...sounds so rejuvenating and calming, Merci, Panagiota
King  Avatar
March 11, 2020 at 7:41 AM
Nice ??
Lindley Avatar
March 11, 2020 at 8:02 AM
Yes, sure it is more than just nice--with a question mark... Are you at a loss for words? A question of its merit astounds me. I hope you may read it again to see.. If not, tis a pity, imho... God bless...
Lindley Avatar
March 11, 2020 at 7:29 AM
Yet again my dear friend, your poetry amazes me. So very much given in this short but so wonderfully wrought piece! Its beautiful imagery and power tops.. A DEFINITE FAV. God bless...
Lindley Avatar
March 11, 2020 at 8:40 AM
Thanks, honor was mine my friend. Your poetry comes from a fine and a true poet's heart.. *The rarity of such bright gems today. *Oft destroy the bleakness of sadder grey. *Casting light upon a glorious birth. *Giving of heart for all of its true worth......
Romios Avatar
March 11, 2020 at 7:44 AM
Thank you Robert! An honor to have you visit my poem. I had just changed the title and added a few lines, as it had so few reads. Anyway, you, dear poet, just made my day. Enjoy the changes.)) P. Romios xxxoooo
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