Surrounded

Under the searchlight
The intruder surrounded
Blades standing Ready


By Robb A. Kopp
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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May 6, 2010 at 12:52 AM
Congratulations on your placing with this fine haiku , well done Rob....Margaret
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May 5, 2010 at 1:47 PM
Robb, I just wanted to drop by and add congratulations on your win in Raul's contest to my other comment. Enjoy your success. Keep on writing. Karen
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May 5, 2010 at 1:02 PM
Congrats Robb on your winning poem in Raul's contest.. a vivid view of the photo presentation.. so enjoy this special win today.. luv... Linda-Marie..
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May 5, 2010 at 12:29 PM
Robb, congratulations on your success in my Summer Tempest contest...Raul
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May 4, 2010 at 1:41 PM
Nice use of imagery for a creative view. I like how the title and first line work together. Best wishes in the contest. Karen
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