Surrounded
SURROUNDED
on the
terrace
shimmering
in the
breeze
concerns
of the
present moment
portals
to
a dialogue
conception
has evolved
encompassing
vocal
demands
a dynamic
which rise
to a
vision
expansive
&
searching
but
thoughtful
&
surprising
its resonance
never incoherent
with a
distinctive feel
it evokes
a cluster
of deep
layers of
time
bright airy
unobtrusive
take their cue
to interrogate
& redefine
to hold
a mirror
&lay bare
problems
to
restore
NOTE:THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' & so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment& changing according to mood is inherently variable.
Copyright © Brian Strand
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