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Surrounded

SURROUNDED on the terrace shimmering in the  breeze concerns of the   present moment portals  to  a dialogue  conception    has evolved  encompassing   vocal  demands a dynamic  which rise  to a vision  expansive  &    searching but  thoughtful  &    surprising its resonance   never incoherent with a  distinctive feel it  evokes  a cluster of deep layers of  time bright airy   unobtrusive take their cue  to interrogate & redefine    to hold  a mirror &lay bare  problems   to  restore NOTE:THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' & so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment& changing according to mood is inherently variable. Copyright © Brian Strand

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