George Aul Poet Verse

Surround Sound

Your loving touch
caresses my heart
each time we embrace;

Your loving words
quiet my mind
each time we talk;

Your loving way
softens my soul
each time we're together...

All of you surrounds all of me.

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Elizabeth Wesley June 22, 2011 at 4:56 PM Tender and true, love how you say so much in so little space.

Andrea Dietrich May 7, 2011 at 12:42 PM wow, I just loved how this all came together in that final one line. Awesome, George.

Carolyn Devonshire May 7, 2011 at 10:27 AM This is what true love feels like, George. We are surrounded by warm, positive feelings every moment. This kind of love helps us deal with all of life's adversity. Beautifully written, my friend. Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta May 4, 2011 at 6:27 PM Passionate feelings of love well with good images, george

Poet Destroyer A May 3, 2011 at 1:19 PM Aul..... greatness to have around....enjoyed... p.d.

Nette Onclaud May 3, 2011 at 11:38 AM delectable in all ways, george! so tenderly rendered :) hugggs, nette