Surrogate Mother

Surrogate Mother Baby Clara will never touch the big hand of Laura, her mother As she was born four months after her mother’s death. Before she died, her friend accepted to act as surrogate mother Laura and her hubby Tom dreaming to hear the baby’s breath. To a surrogate mother Tara who was her mother’s best friend It was like to keep one hand for self and second for this family, And that big hand of Tara touched and held Clara’s small hand *Keeping a part of Laura alive on this earth for me selfishly* A reporter, for her future wrote an open letter after the baby’s birth, “You’re barely a month old now, too young to read this letter But one day someone will show you this letter to know forth How confluence of helping hands brought her in the world, later” Living with Tara’s family for a few days, Tom ready to act as dad, Clara now playing with his hands and fingers in winter’s clad.
++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ **This a true story that took place last month only I have chosen the Visual #2 Date: 21-12-13 Dr. Ram Mehta Fourth Place win Contest: With These Hands by nette onclaud

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Date: 6/5/2014 11:06:00 PM
Dr. Ram This is so heartwarming, sweet and kind. Words to touch the readers soul and emotion. Thank you for the nice comment on my Scary Moments poem.
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Date: 1/15/2014 9:30:00 PM
DR, :) Congrats, with your 'WITH THESE HANDS' winning poem. Have a nice night ~SKAT~
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Date: 1/3/2014 11:12:00 PM
Dr Ram, congratulations, in Nette's WITH THESE HANDS contest... LINDA
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Date: 1/3/2014 3:43:00 PM
this so much depth,dr.ram... cheers to you for a win in my contest!.. huggs
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Date: 1/3/2014 7:09:00 AM
Congrats on your win Dr Ram....Roger
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Date: 1/2/2014 9:51:00 PM
wow, this is awesome, Dr. Ram. Such a tender topic too. Congratulations on the win.
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Date: 1/2/2014 10:08:00 AM
you made an awesome poem here, Dr. Ram!!!! .CONGRATULATIONS!!!! =))
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Date: 1/2/2014 2:10:00 AM
Contest: WITH THESE HANDS / / Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud is retreated!! - CONGRATULATIONS WITH YOUR YOUR BEAUTIFUL WINNING POEM, DR. RAM. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :))))
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Date: 12/22/2013 2:03:00 PM
a very touching write Dr Ram...thanks for stopping by
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Date: 12/22/2013 1:53:00 PM
A miraculous story that can touch any heart and teach the magnanimity of a person's soul! Wonderfully written, a marvel of humanity, Dr. Ram, Thank you for sharing!
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Date: 12/22/2013 7:32:00 AM
This is stunning poetry! Fantastic images of hands reaching to hold the baby's tiny hands.
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Date: 12/22/2013 7:28:00 AM
This is a touching poem. Thanks for posting. Jancarl
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Date: 12/21/2013 7:53:00 PM
This is a great approach by you Dr. Mehta.Love this poem.Thanks for your congratulatory message.
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Date: 12/21/2013 4:32:00 PM
- A deep touching story Dr. Ram. - Good luck in the contest - Happy Christmas to you and your loved ones!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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