Surrender
You are the most incredible man I have ever known. You came into my life like a compelling force of nature. A mighty roaring sea. Like a tidal wave that caught me off guard you surrounded me. Consuming every fiber of my being. Unaware that I was caught in the undertow. I was drawn into the deep, blue ocean with a power too great to overcome. I surrendered to your love .
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