Surrender

I'm giving up, giving in
that's it baby, I'm surrendering
no use fighting
the way I feel
I can't hide it
this is real
I'm surrendering

you had me hooked
from that first kiss
it's been a long time
since I felt like this
take it all
every feeling inside
wrap my heart 
around your finger
I surrender
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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February 14, 2010 at 8:33 PM
VERY NICE POEM ...I ENJOYED READING IT... IRMA
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February 14, 2010 at 7:21 PM
What a sincere and sweet poem. I enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing.
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