Edward Ibeh Poet Verse

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Surrender

Surrender 
with confidence 
to me.
Let's fall in love.
Trust me, it's a risk 
worth taking,
and how!
Put your faith
in me.
Listen to 
my heartbeats
as  I caress you,
the clear sign of my love;
the...
sweetest surrender!

(Yalto)

 "Yalto" is a form invented by yours truly
Line 1-15: 3,4,2,4,5,3,2,3,2,3,3,5,6,1,5 syllables

STRAND COMPLETELY NEW (22) ,any form,any theme (Winner: 1st Place)
Sponsored by Brian Strand
Date written: 08/14/2020

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Paula Goldsmith August 17, 2020 at 8:31 AM Congratulations on your win and on your "Yalto" form. A beautiful poem and picture. Enjoy your win and day...............

Carol Mitra August 15, 2020 at 11:45 PM Yalto....A new one for me....Beautifully rendered...Congrats Edward. Edward Ibeh August 16, 2020 at 7:19 AM Thank you very much, Carol:-)

Anisha Dutta August 15, 2020 at 9:21 PM NICE on poetic touch. Congrats to win. Edward Ibeh August 16, 2020 at 7:19 AM Thank you, Anisha:-)

Silent One August 15, 2020 at 8:55 AM an excellent yalto... it sounds like a car, but i know it is a poetry form lol Edward Ibeh August 15, 2020 at 9:27 AM I appreciate you dropping by, Silent One:-) Thanks for the chuckles!

Vijay Pandit August 14, 2020 at 11:30 AM Teasingly tender..romantic! Edward Ibeh August 14, 2020 at 2:54 PM Thank you, Vijay:-)

Kim Rodrigues August 14, 2020 at 10:07 AM Great opening lines, ending with the sweetest surrender! Edward Ibeh August 14, 2020 at 2:54 PM Thank you, Kim:-)