Surrender
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Surrender
with confidence
to me.
Let's fall in love.
Trust me, it's a risk
worth taking,
and how!
Put your faith
in me.
Listen to
my heartbeats
as I caress you,
the clear sign of my love;
the...
sweetest surrender!
(Yalto)
"Yalto" is a form invented by yours truly
Line 1-15: 3,4,2,4,5,3,2,3,2,3,3,5,6,1,5 syllables
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Date written: 08/14/2020
Copyright © Edward Ibeh | Year Posted 2020
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