Surreal (Reverse Cameo)

Standing
Focusing on the sunset
I’m awed by the beauty of it
Vast colors
In an array of splendor
As nighttime extends
Its arms




Reverse Cameo 2,7,8,3,7,5,2 unrhymed
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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September 28, 2008 at 7:49 AM
So very vivid and beautifully written. Love the ending. Well done. Regards Heidie
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September 24, 2008 at 10:48 AM
What a wonderful view. Nice use of personification in the last two lines. This is a new form to me. Thank you for sharing it as well as providing a creative example. It is amazing how many forms are available to convey a writer's thoughts. I printed this out and hope to try it soon. Thank you also for your kind words regarding my poem. Keep on writing! Karen
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September 24, 2008 at 7:08 AM
Since I've lived here on the Gulf Coast...there is nothing more beautiful that watching the sunset on the Gul of Mexico. I intimately understand and identify with every word. AN excellent poe. My best, Charlie
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