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Surreal Love

I pray to God that it will be a brighter day; I want his warmth to clothe me day after day Someday, the sun will erase all of my doubts and push away the clouds… I want to be a positive schoolboy – but the clouds Cover me like mesmerizing, despondent shrouds I want to be a positive youngster – I need to stay True to my unaccomplished goals everyday Lord, I know life has its ups and downs – but, I must keep a steady pace… I want to develop a stable mentality with no trace of pity Lord, I know life gets problematic in the long run – I FEAR I might fall on my face I just want to be content – I want my dreams to become a reality I'll be loving you forever… for you’re the last thing on my mind before I go to sleep at night I’ll take a moment just to ponder… About you and our time together – thinking about you restores hope, joy and might our love is wholesome and so much more… our love will grow on forevermore… our love is real and it’s a great deal… our love is beyond measure and it’s totally real… Our Love is oh so surreal You melt my anguish away… Our love can heal a broken heart You cherish me in the month of May You blow away winter’s dismay I pray to God for a more optimistic mindset… Hopefully it doesn’t result in forfeits Push away the gray…and laminate it with a striking sunset, I’m drowning in his inclement, rainy regrets I’ll make sure to embrace competition… for you're my reason I run the extra mile, winning honor and applauds I’ll take a moment to pursue my ambition... Of being with you always and forever – I fear I might lose all of my odds With you…your heart isn’t pumping with vile frauds Every single second spent with you… Makes my spirit soar anew... I never experienced such surreal love Our love flourishes rapidly from up above I’m sick with a love flu *cough* *cough*

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Date: 5/16/2013 11:24:00 AM
- David, life should be up and down ......... imagine how boring if every day was like the other. - An interesting and well-written poem - young and in love can be both good and bad. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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