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Surreal: having the disorienting, hallucinatory quality of a dream; unreal; fantastic

Surreal

School to wealth, then to power, a nice continuous wheel
Understanding nature to always make a good deal
Road map so short to great success without any zeal
Rest, play, sleep, travel and yet blessed with everyday meal
Entrance through the great palace gate for the King to kneel
After her every kiss, hidden wounds abruptly heal
Life can still be a fairy tale, no matter how real
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Neumann Avatar
August 1, 2019 at 6:54 AM
Nice one. I like it.
Kiser Avatar
December 18, 2018 at 10:51 AM
This is true but, it seems to be the surreal ones that cause my muse to scream at me. Well done.
Makama Avatar
December 22, 2018 at 9:49 AM
really? Thats a deep thought too... Thank you M.L Kiser for your comment..
Onclaud Avatar
December 18, 2018 at 10:16 AM
right on, funom...life has its delirious moments!...greeat job!...huggs
Makama Avatar
December 22, 2018 at 9:48 AM
Yeah Nette, thank you very much.
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