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Surreal: having the disorienting, hallucinatory quality of a dream; unreal; fantastic

School to wealth, then to power, a nice continuous wheel Understanding nature to always make a good deal Road map so short to great success without any zeal Rest, play, sleep, travel and yet blessed with everyday meal Entrance through the great palace gate for the King to kneel After her every kiss, hidden wounds abruptly heal Life can still be a fairy tale, no matter how real

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Date: 8/1/2019 6:54:00 AM
Nice one. I like it.
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Date: 12/18/2018 10:51:00 AM
This is true but, it seems to be the surreal ones that cause my muse to scream at me. Well done.
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Date: 12/22/2018 9:49:00 AM
really? Thats a deep thought too... Thank you M.L Kiser for your comment..
Date: 12/18/2018 10:16:00 AM
right on, funom...life has its delirious moments!...greeat job!...huggs
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Date: 12/22/2018 9:48:00 AM
Yeah Nette, thank you very much.

Book: Shattered Sighs