Carol Sunshine Brown Poet Quintain (English)

Surprising Seasonal Change

Temperature is going up and the sun is out
Fluffy clouds move slowly across the sky
Thinking it is winter what could this be about
Buds are on the trees and I am wondering why
Dandelions in full bloom as spring has arrived oh my


3rd Place Winner
Short Verse Contest of Brian Strand
02/28/2012

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Poet Destroyer A March 2, 2012 at 9:12 PM CAROL... CONGRATULATIONS ..ON YOUR WONDERFUL WIN~ Have yourself a very nice night ;-)*always..pd

Kim Merryman February 29, 2012 at 3:09 PM It's only February and our azaleas are blooming. Crazy weather! Congrats on your win, Carol! Love, Kim

Sashi Prabhu February 29, 2012 at 3:20 AM spring straved eyes of mine really enjoyed this one...congrats on the win...~sashi

Kash Poet February 29, 2012 at 1:10 AM Carol congratulations on your win.Beautiful poem.

Nette Onclaud February 28, 2012 at 10:08 PM so, so fine, carol.. applause to you for the shining win!..:) huggs

Ralph Taylor February 28, 2012 at 6:00 PM Congrats, Carol. Outstanding well deserved win. Great job. Nice going. Thanks for your comments. luv Ralph

Carol Sunshine Brown February 28, 2012 at 10:57 AM Thank you Brian. It is an honor to place in your contest. Congratulations to all the talented winners. Love, Carol

Lucilla Carrillo February 19, 2012 at 8:01 PM Very nice, I just love the changes. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

Jim Pemberton February 19, 2012 at 2:41 PM Nice words for a beautiful spring time day!

Connie Marcum Wong February 17, 2012 at 1:22 PM A lovely spring poem that should fair well in the contest. Blessings and happy spring!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl February 17, 2012 at 10:35 AM Waitng for the dandelions still but the buds are here on the blueberries. Nice one xx

Harry Horsman February 17, 2012 at 10:13 AM your title, fits the changing world today, Carol. same here in the uk. love the poem. harry

Andrea Dietrich February 17, 2012 at 10:02 AM GOOD spring poem, CArol. I have to tell you how much I love that Avatar!!

Jan Harvey February 17, 2012 at 7:56 AM A whimsical poem. I'd like to try this rhyme scheme. I must imagine nature as ideal for putting to verse. Thx. Jan

Cindy Lu February 17, 2012 at 7:30 AM cannot tell the change of seasons really friend, loved the rythym of your poetry this morning, same here, warmer than usual. globally I believe. very nice read , cannot wait for march 17th! its on my agenda Cheers!

Russell Sivey February 17, 2012 at 7:16 AM This is a special write my friend! I really enjoyed this poem on this fine winter's morning! I do agree with you, it may be winter but Spring is right around the corner! Strange winter this year, but I'm not complaining! Wonderful write Carol, Great Work!!

Anne-Lise Andresen February 17, 2012 at 7:04 AM Carol, it is a beautiful poem you written today.Lovely whit sunshine.....- oxox love Anne-Lise

Doris Culverhouse February 17, 2012 at 7:04 AM enjoyed reading.....yep the dandelions are trying to take over my yard. Cindy Lu February 17, 2012 at 7:31 AM beautiful at first then bothersome, kind of like well, ya know some humans LOL