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Surprising Seasonal Change

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Surprising Seasonal Change

Temperature is going up and the sun is out
Fluffy clouds move slowly across the sky
Thinking it is winter what could this be about
Buds are on the trees and I am wondering why
Dandelions in full bloom as spring has arrived oh my
3rd Place Winner Short Verse Contest of Brian Strand 02/28/2012

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Date: 3/2/2012 9:12:00 PM
CAROL... CONGRATULATIONS ..ON YOUR WONDERFUL WIN~ Have yourself a very nice night ;-)*always..pd
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Date: 2/29/2012 3:09:00 PM
It's only February and our azaleas are blooming. Crazy weather! Congrats on your win, Carol! Love, Kim
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Date: 2/29/2012 3:20:00 AM
spring straved eyes of mine really enjoyed this one...congrats on the win...~sashi
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Date: 2/29/2012 1:10:00 AM
Carol congratulations on your win.Beautiful poem.
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Date: 2/28/2012 10:08:00 PM
so, so fine, carol.. applause to you for the shining win!..:) huggs
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Date: 2/28/2012 6:00:00 PM
Congrats, Carol. Outstanding well deserved win. Great job. Nice going. Thanks for your comments. luv Ralph
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Date: 2/28/2012 10:57:00 AM
Thank you Brian. It is an honor to place in your contest. Congratulations to all the talented winners. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/19/2012 8:01:00 PM
Very nice, I just love the changes. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
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Date: 2/19/2012 2:41:00 PM
Nice words for a beautiful spring time day!
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Date: 2/17/2012 1:22:00 PM
A lovely spring poem that should fair well in the contest. Blessings and happy spring!
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Date: 2/17/2012 10:35:00 AM
Waitng for the dandelions still but the buds are here on the blueberries. Nice one xx
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Date: 2/17/2012 10:13:00 AM
your title, fits the changing world today, Carol. same here in the uk. love the poem. harry
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Date: 2/17/2012 10:02:00 AM
GOOD spring poem, CArol. I have to tell you how much I love that Avatar!!
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Date: 2/17/2012 7:56:00 AM
A whimsical poem. I'd like to try this rhyme scheme. I must imagine nature as ideal for putting to verse. Thx. Jan
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Date: 2/17/2012 7:30:00 AM
cannot tell the change of seasons really friend, loved the rythym of your poetry this morning, same here, warmer than usual. globally I believe. very nice read , cannot wait for march 17th! its on my agenda Cheers!
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Date: 2/17/2012 7:16:00 AM
This is a special write my friend! I really enjoyed this poem on this fine winter's morning! I do agree with you, it may be winter but Spring is right around the corner! Strange winter this year, but I'm not complaining! Wonderful write Carol, Great Work!!
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Date: 2/17/2012 7:04:00 AM
enjoyed reading.....yep the dandelions are trying to take over my yard.
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Date: 2/17/2012 7:31:00 AM
beautiful at first then bothersome, kind of like well, ya know some humans LOL
Date: 2/17/2012 7:04:00 AM
Carol, it is a beautiful poem you written today.Lovely whit sunshine.....- oxox love Anne-Lise
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