Surprise

 SURPRISE

S eductive sea of your tranquil eyes   
U shered me in for an adventurous dive 
R eceived resplendent corals nice
P eppy pure vibes of love came live
R ed and throbbing your heart’s hospice
I opened its door and got a splendid surprise
S pell bound was I to see the shiny oyster shell 
E mbossed on the pearl my name in golden gel! 


20th October,2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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De Beaulieu Avatar
October 20, 2017 at 12:59 PM
Well written Anulaxmi, I enjoyed to read your poem.
Scars Avatar
October 20, 2016 at 12:00 PM
Just lovely Anu...:)-luloo
Nayak Avatar
October 20, 2016 at 1:28 PM
Dear Luloo, thank you for your pleasant visit Dear! I feel so happy , A fabulous week to you, thank you// love, Anu:)
Sands Avatar
October 20, 2016 at 9:17 AM
That is neat to read. Have a nice day.
Nayak Avatar
October 20, 2016 at 1:26 PM
Dear Heidi, thank you for your visit and words, much appreciated:) A fabulous week to you too:) thank you// love, Anu:)
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