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SURPRISE S eductive sea of your tranquil eyes U shered me in for an adventurous dive R eceived resplendent corals nice P eppy pure vibes of love came live R ed and throbbing your heart’s hospice I opened its door and got a splendid surprise S pell bound was I to see the shiny oyster shell E mbossed on the pearl my name in golden gel! 20th October,2016

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Date: 10/20/2017 12:59:00 PM
Well written Anulaxmi, I enjoyed to read your poem.
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Date: 10/20/2016 12:00:00 PM
Just lovely Anu...:)-luloo
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Anulaxmi Nayak
Date: 10/20/2016 1:28:00 PM
Dear Luloo, thank you for your pleasant visit Dear! I feel so happy , A fabulous week to you, thank you// love, Anu:)
Date: 10/20/2016 9:17:00 AM
That is neat to read. Have a nice day.
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Anulaxmi Nayak
Date: 10/20/2016 1:26:00 PM
Dear Heidi, thank you for your visit and words, much appreciated:) A fabulous week to you too:) thank you// love, Anu:)