Premiere Contest WinnerSurprise

I began planning your surprise party over a month ago. I’ve spent many hours over the last few weeks conspiring with your friends and family, all of us working towards the goal of keeping you clueless. Although, that has been a nearly impossible task, I have to say. Considering, you are always so aware of your surroundings, and never let your guard down around anybody. You don’t know how many times I almost let the cat out of the bag, because when something exciting is happening in my life it is you, I want to tell first.  I have wanted to tell you since day one, but to see the look of surprise on your face, in that moment of pure happiness will make all of our hard work well worth it.  It has taken some true teamwork to pull this off successfully. The date has arrived and it is almost time for you to come home. Soon, you will be walking through that front door. I can’t wait to see your face when you see all of the streamers and balloons that took us all day to hang, placing each item in a precise location.  All of the preparations are coming down to the one moment that is almost here.  I hear the doorknob rattle, and it slowly begins to turn. We all scatter and run to our hiding places the way a cockroach does when the light comes on in a darkened room. The door cracks open and in you walk as we all jump out from our hiding places, shouting “surprise!” at the top of our lungs.  Then, with a stunned look, you hit the floor.
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Kauffman Avatar
July 6, 2021 at 2:02 PM
Truly a surprise turned upside down. Congratulations on your trophy win!
Agustin Avatar
July 5, 2021 at 6:26 AM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... with an ending that's "surprising indeed." God bless you.
Goldsmith Avatar
July 3, 2021 at 12:23 PM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful "Surprise" write. I have done a few parties and they are hard to pull off. Have a blessed day/weekend.........
Messina Avatar
July 3, 2021 at 8:43 AM
Mary, I have to tell you...I just love the story and the surprise ending. It totally caught me off guard. Congratulations on your 1st place win! All the best...love & hugs...Charlie
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