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WATER TUNNEL SURFING

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Surfs Up

Traipsing a pool of surging seawater,
Heralds of a large wave caused their squatter,
Illuminating the summer season,
Strands of dread-locks fly, windswept the reason,

As, sets sweep in, so does the huge masses,
Lifts field glasses exchanged for sunglasses,
Locks propped lookout towers shades as, first aids

Call for mouth-to-mouth is then canceled says,
Older boy revived as responder was
Uncle Joe, never that nurse Sue, because,
Liked her skills, though all were tested today,
During tidal surges, ills at the bay,

But, overall, smooth sailing as always,
Everybody deserves a well earned praise.


Date: 08/25/2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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