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rider bridled wave carving through the curving crown - ebullient sea smiled Honorable Mention in STRAND COMPLETELY NEW(8)any theme any form Poetry Contest sponsored by Brian Strand

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Date: 7/26/2020 6:35:00 PM
...excellent example of: the particle and wave physics.......stan sand
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Date: 7/26/2020 6:33:00 PM
...excellent example of: the particle and wave physics.......stan sand
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Date: 7/21/2020 8:19:00 PM
The center point of your haiku is phenomenal!
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/22/2020 9:43:00 PM
Thank you Kim for your support..
Date: 7/19/2020 1:56:00 PM
- ... looks really cool ... but I'm a chicken :) - I like it a lot more than Brian - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/22/2020 9:42:00 PM
lol.. Thank you Anne..
Date: 7/17/2020 9:54:00 AM
Super haiku. Reminds me of days long ago surfing Cocoa Beach and Long John's surf shop was nothing more than a whole in the wall.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/18/2020 11:36:00 PM
Thank you Bette for your support.. Have a great day..
Date: 7/15/2020 6:32:00 PM
This haiku made me smile just like the sea, Jenish. Next time I see a wave, I will think of a smile! Congratulations on your winning placement!
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/16/2020 3:04:00 AM
Thank you Sam for your delightful comment.. Have a great day..
Date: 7/14/2020 4:11:00 AM
Ohh! those pesky Honorable Mentions...should have placed higher...but congrats anyway Jenish...^WW^ :o)
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/14/2020 11:38:00 PM
Thank you Winged Warrior for your support..
Date: 7/13/2020 9:50:00 AM
Great you got Honorable Mention. This was beautiful, dear Poetess. Panagiota.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/13/2020 11:55:00 PM
Thank you poetess for your support.. Blessings from a trying poet..
Date: 7/13/2020 7:20:00 AM
That is magnificent! So powerful and so beautiful dearest, Jenish. Kudos!
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/13/2020 11:53:00 PM
Thank you Demetrios for your delightful words.. Have a great day..
Date: 7/12/2020 11:47:00 PM
Just a picturesque panorama's panoply of imagery here, Jenish! Wow! So much to sense in just three lines!... And cry me a river, will ya, if I've seen a wave on a river like that one! Wow! Bravo, Gershon
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/13/2020 12:29:00 AM
Thank you Gershon for those delightful comments.. If I've seen a wave like that, I will sure run for my life.. lol..
Date: 7/12/2020 10:56:00 PM
The rider looks like he is trapped in a violent vortex and enjoying the voyage... It's an awesome Haiku... Thank you, Jenis....
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/12/2020 11:27:00 PM
Thank you Shirley for those delightful words.. Have a great day..
Date: 7/12/2020 8:16:00 PM
Great imagery of one who wants to tame the wild sea! Blessings, Rhonda xx
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/12/2020 11:26:00 PM
Thank you Rhonda..
Date: 7/12/2020 10:33:00 AM
if the sea was human I wonder if it would smile knowing it made it not only rough for the rider , but also see him enjoy himself and make it. Love the imagery. Hugs Eve
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/12/2020 11:26:00 PM
Thank you Eve for your kind support..
Date: 7/12/2020 6:24:00 AM
Your words surf on waves, Jenish--well done.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/12/2020 8:51:00 AM
Thank you Vijay..
Date: 7/12/2020 5:57:00 AM
...wowza...that was like surfing on the sounds echoing at a rolling stones concert ......or...aerosmith......stan sand
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/12/2020 8:51:00 AM
Thank you Sand..
Date: 7/12/2020 2:03:00 AM
Every word necessary, and no extra ones. Your imagery is felt.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/12/2020 4:29:00 AM
Thank you Caren for your support..Have a great day..