Jenish Somadas Poet Haiku

Surfing On Waves

rider bridled wave
carving through the curving crown -
ebullient sea smiled


Honorable Mention in STRAND COMPLETELY NEW(8)any theme any form Poetry Contest sponsored by Brian Strand

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Sand Blown July 26, 2020 at 6:35 PM ...excellent example of: the particle and wave physics.......stan sand

Sand Blown July 26, 2020 at 6:33 PM ...excellent example of: the particle and wave physics.......stan sand

Kim Rodrigues July 21, 2020 at 8:19 PM The center point of your haiku is phenomenal! Jenish Somadas July 22, 2020 at 9:43 PM Thank you Kim for your support..

Anne-Lise Andresen July 19, 2020 at 1:56 PM - ... looks really cool ... but I'm a chicken :) - I like it a lot more than Brian - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Jenish Somadas July 22, 2020 at 9:42 PM lol.. Thank you Anne..

Bette Bavington July 17, 2020 at 9:54 AM Super haiku. Reminds me of days long ago surfing Cocoa Beach and Long John's surf shop was nothing more than a whole in the wall. Jenish Somadas July 18, 2020 at 11:36 PM Thank you Bette for your support.. Have a great day..

Sam Kauffman July 15, 2020 at 6:32 PM This haiku made me smile just like the sea, Jenish. Next time I see a wave, I will think of a smile! Congratulations on your winning placement! Jenish Somadas July 16, 2020 at 3:04 AM Thank you Sam for your delightful comment.. Have a great day..

Winged Warrior July 14, 2020 at 4:11 AM Ohh! those pesky Honorable Mentions...should have placed higher...but congrats anyway Jenish...^WW^ :o) Jenish Somadas July 14, 2020 at 11:38 PM Thank you Winged Warrior for your support..

Panagiota Romios July 13, 2020 at 9:50 AM Great you got Honorable Mention. This was beautiful, dear Poetess. Panagiota. Jenish Somadas July 13, 2020 at 11:55 PM Thank you poetess for your support.. Blessings from a trying poet..

Demetrios Trifiatis July 13, 2020 at 7:20 AM That is magnificent! So powerful and so beautiful dearest, Jenish. Kudos! Jenish Somadas July 13, 2020 at 11:53 PM Thank you Demetrios for your delightful words.. Have a great day..

Gershon Wolf July 12, 2020 at 11:47 PM Just a picturesque panorama's panoply of imagery here, Jenish! Wow! So much to sense in just three lines!... And cry me a river, will ya, if I've seen a wave on a river like that one! Wow! Bravo, Gershon Jenish Somadas July 13, 2020 at 12:29 AM Thank you Gershon for those delightful comments.. If I've seen a wave like that, I will sure run for my life.. lol..

Shirley Hawkins July 12, 2020 at 10:56 PM The rider looks like he is trapped in a violent vortex and enjoying the voyage... It's an awesome Haiku... Thank you, Jenis.... Jenish Somadas July 12, 2020 at 11:27 PM Thank you Shirley for those delightful words.. Have a great day..

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders July 12, 2020 at 8:16 PM Great imagery of one who wants to tame the wild sea! Blessings, Rhonda xx Jenish Somadas July 12, 2020 at 11:26 PM Thank you Rhonda..

Eve Roper July 12, 2020 at 10:33 AM if the sea was human I wonder if it would smile knowing it made it not only rough for the rider , but also see him enjoy himself and make it. Love the imagery. Hugs Eve Jenish Somadas July 12, 2020 at 11:26 PM Thank you Eve for your kind support..

Vijay Pandit July 12, 2020 at 6:24 AM Your words surf on waves, Jenish--well done. Jenish Somadas July 12, 2020 at 8:51 AM Thank you Vijay..

Sand Blown July 12, 2020 at 5:57 AM ...wowza...that was like surfing on the sounds echoing at a rolling stones concert ......or...aerosmith......stan sand Jenish Somadas July 12, 2020 at 8:51 AM Thank you Sand..

Caren Krutsinger July 12, 2020 at 2:03 AM Every word necessary, and no extra ones. Your imagery is felt. Jenish Somadas July 12, 2020 at 4:29 AM Thank you Caren for your support..Have a great day..