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unrhymed couplets 

Supreme Being

When you came to me the earth revolved then stood still
dressed jewel of purest sunlight circled in gold mere reflections 

Through the oceans wings sailing inside waves embrace 
we rise and fall drawing from a breathless air filled with Peace 

Caught up within the sparkle lustre that sings from an echo returning 
twinkling stars light warmly together ally an alliance between souls 

Captured brightly the spirit of eternal beauty brings, under glowing beams 
when we act together as one temple forever crowns the heart to Love
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Cunningham Avatar
August 12, 2018 at 9:21 AM
Long live the Queen and her loyal like tickets.
Cunningham Avatar
August 12, 2018 at 6:15 AM
Long live the queen and her merry band.
Dalei Avatar
August 10, 2018 at 11:51 PM
Very beautiful. Hope, at present your earth is revolving nice . Congratulation for your well deserved POTW.........hugs//Manmath
Foster Avatar
August 9, 2018 at 12:20 PM
Congratulations Liam on your featured Poem of the Week is very lovely indeed. Thank you for sharing such a heartfelt write, I truly enjoyed the read. Many Blessings, Adell
Lindley Avatar
August 7, 2018 at 3:41 AM
My friend congratulations on this gem being selected as POTW!!! Absolutely beautiful couplets! A fav...
Ashley Avatar
August 6, 2018 at 12:50 AM
Your poem is exquisite, Liam. Congratulations on your wonderful and well deserved POTW honors for your breathtaking piece. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Bateman Avatar
August 5, 2018 at 5:09 PM
Hello Liam Mate!! Many Congratulations on the POTW selection!! A superbly-done couplet. A FAVE!! Cheers and Best, Gary
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 5, 2018 at 5:06 PM
Outstanding creation Liam! Big congratulations on having this beauty honored with POTW! : )
Pandit Avatar
July 29, 2018 at 4:43 PM
Beautiful poetry Liam. A great message in your poem.
Petersen Potter Avatar
July 29, 2018 at 11:47 AM
Hi Liam!:))Wow!This is the most very beautiful romantic tender sweet n' captivating love poem you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful,sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I love it!A most very beautiful heartfelt romantic dreamy heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet! Just wonderful!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful romantic gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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