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Supreme Being

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unrhymed couplets

When you came to me the earth revolved then stood still dressed jewel of purest sunlight circled in gold mere reflections Through the oceans wings sailing inside waves embrace we rise and fall drawing from a breathless air filled with Peace Caught up within the sparkle lustre that sings from an echo returning twinkling stars light warmly together ally an alliance between souls Captured brightly the spirit of eternal beauty brings, under glowing beams when we act together as one temple forever crowns the heart to Love

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Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/12/2018 9:21:00 AM

Long live the Queen and her loyal like tickets.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/12/2018 6:15:00 AM

Long live the queen and her merry band.

Manmath Dalei

Date: 8/10/2018 11:51:00 PM

Very beautiful. Hope, at present your earth is revolving nice . Congratulation for your well deserved POTW.........hugs//Manmath

Adell Foster

Date: 8/9/2018 12:20:00 PM

Congratulations Liam on your featured Poem of the Week is very lovely indeed. Thank you for sharing such a heartfelt write, I truly enjoyed the read. Many Blessings, Adell

Robert Lindley

Date: 8/7/2018 3:41:00 AM

My friend congratulations on this gem being selected as POTW!!! Absolutely beautiful couplets! A fav...

Susan Ashley

Date: 8/6/2018 12:50:00 AM

Your poem is exquisite, Liam. Congratulations on your wonderful and well deserved POTW honors for your breathtaking piece. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Gary Bateman

Date: 8/5/2018 5:09:00 PM

Hello Liam Mate!! Many Congratulations on the POTW selection!! A superbly-done couplet. A FAVE!! Cheers and Best, Gary

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/5/2018 5:06:00 PM

Outstanding creation Liam! Big congratulations on having this beauty honored with POTW! : )

Vijay Pandit

Date: 7/29/2018 4:43:00 PM

Beautiful poetry Liam. A great message in your poem.

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 7/29/2018 11:47:00 AM

Hi Liam!:))Wow!This is the most very beautiful romantic tender sweet n' captivating love poem you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful,sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I love it!A most very beautiful heartfelt romantic dreamy heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet! Just wonderful!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful romantic gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^