Andrea Dietrich Poet Rhyme

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For the 'Pick-A-Title, Vol 44 - ' Poetry Contest of Edward Ibeh/ May 23, 2024

Chosen for Ink Empress'  the 'Poem of Your Heart' Poetry Contest

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Supine, Looking At the Sky

Supine, looking at the sky
I’m on a hill, where daisies with the breeze
are dancing. I see birds and wish to fly -
to soar with them with joy and great ease.

Supine, with my heart in flight,
I’m flirting with the clouds surrounding me.
My spirit’s wings reach a lofty height.
Now higher than the birds, I soar free.

Supine, dreamily I glide.
The sun is sliding down, and I am one
with hues rose-red and tangerine, I ride
a radiant ray of the setting sun.

Supine, I’m falling to sleep.
I dream I am a goddess, and her name
is Luna. Underneath me shadows creep.
My reign of star-filled night I now reclaim.

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Susan Ashley December 27, 2024 at 7:55 AM Dear Andrea, your airy imagery is dreamy and your use of enjambment is smooth perfection. So Lovely! Congratulations for your success in Ink's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Edward Ibeh December 26, 2024 at 5:19 AM So nice revisiting this beauty, Andrea:-) Congratulations on your win in Inky's contest! Well-deserved.

Ink Empress December 25, 2024 at 7:03 AM Ah, I’ve said everything below, I guess, regarding this poem. Thank you for sharing this again. Congratulations on placing in the top five in my contest! Well deserved, sweet Andrea! Hope Christmas is treating you well! Im doing pedicure finally today/ hah. And just sitting here commenting as iv already judged this contest a bit earlier so finally finalized it! Sending you light always. Congratulations again Andrea Dietrich December 25, 2024 at 9:14 AM Wow thanks. I just got in soup and your is first comment I have seen

Edward Ibeh July 1, 2024 at 8:13 AM Andrea, I love the flow of your beautiful write. Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest!

Tonye George June 25, 2024 at 9:17 PM Congratulations Dear, Andrea on your win.

Paige Hind May 27, 2024 at 4:48 PM Wow, beautiful flow....I loved your repetition of "supine" this or that....

Duke Beaufort May 27, 2024 at 12:14 PM Andrea, this is a beautiful scene and set of thoughts. It reminds me of the feeling one gets when actually flying as pilot of something small. We are free to move in all dimensions. Your poem has those qualities and expounds on them with grace and peace. Andrea Dietrich May 27, 2024 at 4:08 PM thanks, Duke . I loved writing for that topic.

Ink Empress May 25, 2024 at 3:20 AM Wow this is beyond beautiful! Another one of my new faves from you! Youv written so well dear andrea with exquisite imagery and i really love the lines “ im flirting with clouds” and daisy line as well as the ending! But i must also state every word in this hits so strong and artistically for me! Fave this is for me! Think EI will also love this! Best wishes Andrea Dietrich May 25, 2024 at 8:15 AM I always appreciate your sweet comments so much. Thank you.

Jay Narain May 24, 2024 at 11:07 AM Nice poem with great imagery. Best wishes in the contest. Andrea Dietrich May 25, 2024 at 8:17 AM Thanks, Jay

Sam Kauffman May 24, 2024 at 11:02 AM Andrea, if this loveliness comes from being "supine," I hope you are "supine" more often for we are the beneficiaries of "radiant rays," " flirty clouds, dancing daisies and starry nights sheltered by Luna! Just lovely, my friend! Best wishes for the contest along with blessings for your supine moments. Andrea Dietrich May 25, 2024 at 8:15 AM Thanks very much

Daniel Henry Rodgers May 24, 2024 at 6:29 AM Dear Andrea, What a breathtaking journey through dreams and imagination. Your imagery of freedom and serenity is amazing as if I am floating alongside you on that hilltop. The seamless flow of your words carries me through each stanza, leaving me in awe of the beauty you've captured. This is a beautiful piece. - Blessings, My Friend, Daniel Andrea Dietrich May 25, 2024 at 8:18 AM You write such sweet comments to everyone. Thanks

Sotto Poet May 23, 2024 at 7:28 PM I appreciate the reflective nature of your poetry, Andrea. The metaphors you presented were aesthetically pleasing and fascinating. Andrea Dietrich May 25, 2024 at 8:18 AM Thank you, Sotto

Miranda Hawley May 23, 2024 at 3:18 PM I had to look up supine, and now I know a new word. Your scenery sounds serene in your poem. Good job! Andrea Dietrich May 25, 2024 at 8:16 AM Thanks. I only knew that word from doing a different challenge with it years ago.