Caryl Ramsdale Poet Verse

Superstar

Striking colored lights dazzle
Her dynamic dance routines—
Wearing stagehands to a frazzle
Illuminating live scenes
Spotlighting three tambourines.
Her shimmering white tights cast
Opalescence unforeseen
Climaxing one last bright blast.

Caryl Ramsdale 
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Verse Poetry Form

July 29, 2011
	
"HUTAIN THIS ONE..." poetry contest sponsored by nette onclaud

~ 1st Place ~	
08/03/2011

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Andrea Dietrich September 20, 2011 at 12:54 AM hmmm, maybe I have read all your poems by now. Did you take some of them down or did you never have many up? I sure hope to see many more, CAryl. Caryl Ramsdale September 20, 2011 at 10:57 AM Andrea, Since my first appearance on PoetrySoup in 2006 I have had a habit of removing my posted poems annually and beginning anew by the first of every year. I'm taking down and organizing my collection of written works again this year as usual. Thanks for reading, commenting and asking my friend. Have a wonderful day. CR

Fabiyas M V September 17, 2011 at 10:15 AM It's a nice poem,Caryl.I think this poem has won contest.Congratulations though belated! Caryl Ramsdale September 20, 2011 at 10:58 AM Fabiyas, Thanks for stopping by to read and comment. CR

Caryl Ramsdale September 13, 2011 at 12:17 PM Dear fellow poet: Taking a time out while I organize my collection of poetry forms. Be back soon! CR

Lee Ramage August 4, 2011 at 8:06 PM Excellent poem. Congratulations on your well deserved win. Lee Caryl Ramsdale September 20, 2011 at 10:59 AM Thanks Lee. Have another creative day filled with blessings my friend. CR

Dr.Ram Mehta August 4, 2011 at 1:25 PM Congratulations on the first place win in the contest of nette, Caryl Caryl Ramsdale September 20, 2011 at 11:00 AM Thank you again for leaving behind a comment my friend. Much appreciated. CR

Black Eyed Susan August 4, 2011 at 11:49 AM congratulations on your 1st place win! you paint an exciting dance scene :) Caryl Ramsdale September 20, 2011 at 11:01 AM Thanks Susan. Have a great day. CR

Jack Horne August 4, 2011 at 11:35 AM Wow, so many contest results again! Many congrats for all your wins : ) Caryl Ramsdale September 20, 2011 at 11:02 AM Jack, Your remarks are always appreciated. CR

Carol Sunshine Brown August 4, 2011 at 9:14 AM Congratulations on your 1st Place win in Nette's "Hutain" contest Caryl. Love, Carol Caryl Ramsdale September 20, 2011 at 11:03 AM Thanks my friend. I appreciate your comments. CR

Tahera Mannan August 4, 2011 at 2:14 AM An apt description of the picture made lovely by your words. Many congrats for this win Caryl Caryl Ramsdale August 4, 2011 at 2:58 AM Thank you much! Caryl

Andrea Dietrich August 3, 2011 at 11:24 PM I KNEW this one would score big! Congratulations. Caryl Ramsdale August 4, 2011 at 2:57 AM You were right...but I didn't expect it. I was totally surprised. I guess I'm not a very good judge of my own works. Thanks for the kind comments. Caryl

Debbie Guzzi August 3, 2011 at 8:00 PM Congrad's on this romp of a win! Light & Love

Debbie Guzzi August 3, 2011 at 7:59 PM Congrad's on this romp of a win! Light & Love

Sunflower Poetess August 3, 2011 at 6:45 PM Caryl, congrats on your 1st place win with this verse. Enjoyed the read. Love Glenna

Charlotte Puddifoot August 3, 2011 at 6:38 PM congrats on a superb 1st place write, very colourful and vivid...

Chiquitachiamaka Baity August 3, 2011 at 6:05 PM Congratulations on your win Caryl....luv it...!!!!!

Iolanda Scripca August 3, 2011 at 3:59 PM What ah original take of the photo ! Just wonderful. Congratulations on your well deserved big win, dear Caryl!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 3, 2011 at 2:48 PM Congrats Caryl on your first place win with this prolific poetry luv..

Carrie Richards August 3, 2011 at 2:06 PM What a unique theme for your poem....outstanding work, and orginal subject matter!! Congratulations!!! ps...and thank you for your very kind comments, ...they always mean more to me than than I can ever say! :)

Andrea Dietrich August 2, 2011 at 1:03 AM What a sparkling bedecked superstar she is! It's sure to please the eye of Nette!

Doris Culverhouse August 1, 2011 at 10:45 PM I wont to try this....it sounds interesting.

Phyllis Babcock July 29, 2011 at 11:53 PM Glad to see you back at the soup . Enjoyed reading this wonderful poem. Good luck in Nette's contest Caryl. love phyl