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Supernatural Cold

When God sneezes it's a
lightening show
Because when lightening flashes
it is not slow
Thunder clashes and the clouds
they show
Gods nose is running
but pure is the flow
Some may say God doesn't 
catch colds
But if God can get angry
why can't he catch colds
Some may say
what are his symtoms
When clouds are grey
and thunder grumbling
all of a sudden
a sonic boom
and a flash of light 
you can't tell me 
that's voluntary
so lets just call it
a sneeze

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/1/2023 6:29:00 AM
We may never really know what causes thunder and lightning, but it is fun to wonder about it... I enjoyed reading your poem this morning, John. Very creative and thought-provoking!
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Date: 10/30/2015 6:26:00 PM
Dear John What do you say to God if he sneezes, that's my question after reading this one, I'm not trying to be smart just asking an interesting question at least to me? Love the poem it is thought provoking, and the imagery is marvelous my friend seriously, it's very good. Thank you also for the comment on my adbuction poem, the subject matter appealed to me alot so I went with it, cheri
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Date: 10/18/2015 3:25:00 PM
What a very funny piece....I burst into laughing as I read it end..a seven for this powerful piece. excellent..........A.M.
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Date: 10/14/2015 7:08:00 PM
Imaginative write. Bravo
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Date: 10/12/2015 9:15:00 PM
Lol, yeah I agree :)
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