Superior's Split Rock Bay Fog

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08/22/13
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Fog rolled in over
my knees

Sending a cool tingling right up
my arms

Refreshing my thoughts

A smile
aware of its origin

Leapt from my soul through
upturned lips

Sharing joy with deep blue bells
yawning about me

Tall lungwort

Breathing the same life giving

Moist fog

The same

Life giving

Moist

Fog

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 8/28/2013 6:21:00 PM
Great imagery, I feel like the fog is a living entity.
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Date: 8/27/2013 6:52:00 AM
I can feel the fog and see the scene from your description..Enjoyed reading your nature work this morn..Sara
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Date: 8/23/2013 10:43:00 PM
James, the poem is simply breathtaking. I've always felt as if the fog was alive... i also see the smile... :-) LINDA
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Date: 8/23/2013 2:48:00 AM
- Mysterious fog .... beautiful to look at ... - A clever poem, well done. - Have a beautiful weekend, James. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/22/2013 8:55:00 PM
the fog gave this a mysterious feel, good use of images...loved the end, perfect! :)
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