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08/22/13
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Fog rolled in over my knees Sending a cool tingling right up my arms Refreshing my thoughts A smile aware of its origin Leapt from my soul through upturned lips Sharing joy with deep blue bells yawning about me Tall lungwort Breathing the same life giving Moist fog The same Life giving Moist Fog

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Date: 8/28/2013 6:21:00 PM
Great imagery, I feel like the fog is a living entity.
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Date: 8/27/2013 6:52:00 AM
I can feel the fog and see the scene from your description..Enjoyed reading your nature work this morn..Sara
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Date: 8/23/2013 10:43:00 PM
James, the poem is simply breathtaking. I've always felt as if the fog was alive... i also see the smile... :-) LINDA
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Date: 8/23/2013 2:48:00 AM
- Mysterious fog .... beautiful to look at ... - A clever poem, well done. - Have a beautiful weekend, James. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/22/2013 8:55:00 PM
the fog gave this a mysterious feel, good use of images...loved the end, perfect! :)
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