Twanna Irisha Poet I do not know?

Superfly

SUPERFLY!

       I'm here to signify, to make known, to imply, why I'm so fly!
            I'm a women separated from the rest,
                or from all others I'm the best!
               My self-esteem is overwhelming.
                Having the power of attracting.
                I pay the cost to be the boss,
                        without no flaws!
                 Cold as ice, hotter than fire.
               Cooler than the winters degrees,
                warmer than the summer breeze.
                  Momma was a rolling stone,
             I was put here to claim her throne!
                    Atribute to the best,
           now time for the others to be layed to rest!
                 My contribution is to the best,
     respiatory to all the rest, hitting them straight to the chest.
               That's why they call me superfly!
             They say birds in a flock fly together,
                    I fly alone in any weather! 
                        No one can do this better.
        Born on leap year a birthday that comes every 4 years!
                         keeps me sincere!
           Sincere to the game, and loving all the fame!
          Rape'ing hearts while I'm climbing the charts,
                        That's why I'm fly!

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Poet Destroyer A October 20, 2013 at 12:03 AM Twanna... CONGRATULATIONS:) on having your poem featured on the soups HOME PAGE. Goodnight poet friend <3 =)LINDA

Sean Cannon October 17, 2013 at 9:43 AM Always love the confidence and cockiness of people- as a wise piece of experience I was taught, its "Always better to do too much, because then you can bring it back". Your piece is strong, and its wise to remind yourself of your confidence. If you are open to constructive criticism however, I would like to suggest concrete action to put wiht the abstract of the poem. And abstract poem is always nice, but when you can succsessfully add in examples (though its hard) it becomes magical. -Beastboy

Ajalon Michael Zarate October 16, 2013 at 11:02 AM YOU ARE FLY INDEED...KEEP IT COMING MAMA!

Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet June 19, 2012 at 8:50 AM REAL TALK!YOU ARE SUPERFLY!I A LOVING THIS ONE BABYGIRL! Twanna Irisha June 19, 2012 at 10:09 AM lol...thank you.

Natalie The Rogue Rhymer November 22, 2011 at 4:57 PM Love it Twanna-you go girl! Twanna Irisha November 26, 2011 at 10:29 AM Thank you :)