Supercalifragilisticexpialidocious

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Placed Third in:

Supercalifragilisticexpialidocious Poetry Contest 

Sponsored by Charles Messina

 

 

“Blue moon you saw me standing alone
Without a dream in my heart
Without a love of my own.” Lorenz Hart


                                  Supercalifragilisticexpialidocious

                                     What an extraordinary eyesight
                               To gaze at a blue moon with delight
                                With its wonderful shine in the sky
                                 That dazzles the iris of the eyes.

                           Eyes, indeed, are lured with such relish
                            Sky with such tints diffuses great bliss
                           Delight flows from the heart of viewers
                         Sight of such beauty charms good suitors.

                            Such scenes sink deep in the memory.

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Date: 5/22/2025 6:53:00 AM
A wonderful write, Krishnanand. But oops...line (1) only has 8 syllables. Congratulations on your placement in my contest and thanks for entering! Charlie
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Krishnanand Guptar
Date: 5/22/2025 12:05:00 PM
Thanks a lot friend for appreciating the above poem and for its placement in the poetry contest sponsored by you. The minor slip in the first line has now been addressed. Wish you a pleasant day.
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