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04/07/25

Supercalifragilisticexpialidocious 

Fourth Place

Contest by Charles Messina 

Supercalifragilisticexpialidocious


   My sweetest granddaughter Dear, My Dear!   
     I love you most my child : Am I clear !
     You have won my whole heart since a kid.
     gradually turning smart indeed.
    
     Indeed you are God’s wonderful gift,
     Kid no more now ten, charming polite.
     Clear clean generous heart, my best bliss.
     Dear, you are too far, I am to miss !

     But to meet on  Skype  at week end.
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May 22, 2025 at 6:39 AM
I loved this sweet poem, Anisha. Oops you forgot to incorporate the words (extraordinary, great, good and wonderful) into your poem. Congrats on your placement in my contest and thanks for entering! Charlie
Messina Avatar
May 22, 2025 at 2:36 PM
It was confusing, I know. Great writing!
Dutta Avatar
May 22, 2025 at 7:04 AM
So sorry. I thought, ONE word is to be used between four words. SO I chose only ‘Wonderful.’ I could have easily used other three words. Have Good Days.
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