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Supercalifragilisticexpialidocious

Something extraordinary I knew In that magic moment I heard you. Your wonderful voice so alluring, That led to a love all enduring Enduring our love will always stay. Alluring your voice until this day. You are everything good in my life; Always knew you would be my wife. Our live together have brought great joy

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Charles Messina

Date: 5/22/2025 6:42:00 AM

Such a sweet poem, Bryn. But oops... (line (7) only had 8 syllables) Congratulations on your placement in my contest! Charlie

Bryn Strudwick
Date: 5/25/2025 4:42:00 AM

Of course you're right. It was a typo. I meant to include the word 'that'

Charles Messina
Date: 5/22/2025 2:34:00 PM

OOPs my bad it is line 8 that only has 8 syllables. Either way it's a wonderful poem, so Congratulations to you!

Bryn Strudwick
Date: 5/22/2025 1:03:00 PM

Hi Charlie, Sorry to disagree but, according to 'howmanysyllables.com', line 7 has 9 syllables Bryn