Sotto Poet Poet Rhyme

Supercalifragilisticexpialidocious

Written March 28, 2025, for contest sponsored by Charles Messina

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Time splits up round and round in circles
Sun is searing the Earth with hurtles
How much does our environment change
Heat leads icy decay to assuage

Assuage the sense of loss linked with strife
Change climate setups for better life
Hurtles into the sun, shows prevail
Circles under eyes, and skin turns pale

It sounds amazing to be near strife

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Paula Goldsmith May 22, 2025 at 11:45 AM Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. Have a blessed day with your win................

Charles Messina May 22, 2025 at 6:10 AM A wonderful poem, Lasaad. Oops...you were supposed to incorporate the words (extraordinary, wonderful, good & great) into your poem. Congrats on your placement and thanks for entering my contest. Charlie

Silent One March 30, 2025 at 3:31 AM Great take for this contest, I really like how you thought about this one... Interest entries in this contest and yours will do well, I feel.. All the best.

Andrea Dietrich March 29, 2025 at 11:15 AM Well done, Sotto. Gosh I am seeing lots of these. I better start going on it!

Anne-Lise Andresen March 29, 2025 at 10:30 AM - Extremely good poem, Las :) - GL in the contest :) - Happy weekend :) - hugs

CayCay Godwin March 29, 2025 at 10:17 AM I had to revise my entry 3 times, one was because I hadn't realized the words extraordinary, wonderful, good and great had to be in the poem. Yepper, go read directions, vent, and recreate, all of which, I'm sure, will lead to a Sotto-masterpiece. Shame, this is a beaut on it's own. CayCay