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Supercalifragilisticexpialidocious

Written March 28, 2025, for contest sponsored by Charles Messina ******************* Time splits up round and round in circles Sun is searing the Earth with hurtles How much does our environment change Heat leads icy decay to assuage Assuage the sense of loss linked with strife Change climate setups for better life Hurtles into the sun, shows prevail Circles under eyes, and skin turns pale It sounds amazing to be near strife

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Date: 3/30/2025 3:31:00 AM
Great take for this contest, I really like how you thought about this one... Interest entries in this contest and yours will do well, I feel.. All the best.
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Date: 3/29/2025 11:15:00 AM
Well done, Sotto. Gosh I am seeing lots of these. I better start going on it!
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Date: 3/29/2025 10:30:00 AM
- Extremely good poem, Las :) - GL in the contest :) - Happy weekend :) - hugs
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Date: 3/29/2025 10:17:00 AM
I had to revise my entry 3 times, one was because I hadn't realized the words extraordinary, wonderful, good and great had to be in the poem. Yepper, go read directions, vent, and recreate, all of which, I'm sure, will lead to a Sotto-masterpiece. Shame, this is a beaut on it's own. CayCay
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