1st in Supercalifragilisticexpialidocious Contest (Sponsor: Charles Messina)
Judged: May 22nd, 2025
Your good love strengthens bones like sunshine My nose, a rose, a toast of red wine The great flames of passion licking hot though evenings grow, firsts sometimes forgot Forgot that tender morn our eyes met Hot with extraordinary sweat, wet Wine, a blush cabernet, sparkling smiles Sunshine spotless, a wonderful while Would I forget Heaven's first advent
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