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1st in Supercalifragilisticexpialidocious Contest (Sponsor: Charles Messina)

Judged: May 22nd, 2025

Your good love strengthens bones like sunshine 
My nose, a rose, a toast of red wine 
The great flames of passion licking hot
though evenings grow, firsts sometimes forgot 

Forgot that tender morn our eyes met 
Hot with extraordinary sweat, wet
Wine, a blush cabernet, sparkling smiles 
Sunshine spotless, a wonderful while 

Would I forget Heaven's first advent

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Date: 5/23/2025 7:54:00 AM
Trina, love the rhythm! Congrats! Fave!
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Date: 5/22/2025 8:03:00 AM
I love this, Trina. So well written!! Congratulations on your top win in my hard-to-do and difficult contest! Charlie
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Trina Layne
Date: 5/22/2025 7:23:00 PM
Thanks, Charles, I had fun with it, as I always do!
Date: 3/28/2025 6:03:00 AM
I guess that hot event qualifies for theme consideration. Wishing you a topper
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Trina Layne
Date: 3/28/2025 10:22:00 AM
Hey, I still have some ambivalence about this one. It was a good challenge. Hot event :)

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