Bl Devnath Poet Haiku

Superb Illusion

life's limited time
                                    flows in unlimit current 
                                    death's last conclusion

                                      everyone knows well 
                                doom day's nearing day by day
                                       no feeling of fear 

                                        superb illusion
                                    erases unconsciously 
                                     love inspires to live

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Harry Horsman July 21, 2015 at 3:38 PM I like this BL, i've always believed that those who suffer in life want to die, those with everything do not.....your poetry as usual as got me thinking... Bl Devnath July 22, 2015 at 10:20 AM Thanks my lovely friend for your nice comment. Love only inspires to live. Without love everything in life is fed. i feel so. Loved always,bl

Skat A July 20, 2015 at 2:51 PM Love also inspires all to live. Love SKAT Bl Devnath July 20, 2015 at 2:58 PM Thanks my lovely friend for your lovely credit and comment. Loved always,bl