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Super Wolf Red Moon

I await with great excitement the arrival of a Super Moon Ascending in the western sky a spherical rubicund ethereal balloon Appearing so much larger as she rises close to earth A beautiful pregnant lady who is waiting to give birth 22nd April 2019 THIRD PLACE Contest: Rithimus Divisa Sponsor: Gregory R Barden This Stanza has been taken from my original poem 'A PREGNANT MOON' Written 21st January 2019

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/27/2019 2:34:00 AM

Ah, so poignant and expectant! Pun intended.

P.S. Awtry

Date: 4/26/2019 10:44:00 PM

This stands alone quite nicely! Reads like a winner to me :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 4/23/2019 3:16:00 AM

Superbly written. My wife and I go to the beach , sit down and for hours obseve the moon reflected upon the placid waters of the sea! Marvelous my friend, Ann!

Ann Gilmour
Date: 4/23/2019 2:37:00 PM

What a magical way for you both to spend an evening Demetrios. I too live beside the sea and there is nothing more mesmerising than to witness a glorious full moon reflecting upon the water. In fact I would say I am completely besotted by the moon and like you I can gaze at it for hours! Sending you both magical moonbeams from the UK and kindest thoughts Ann xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/22/2019 5:25:00 PM

what a lovely description of "her" I always am fond of personification!

Ann Gilmour
Date: 4/23/2019 1:34:00 AM

Many thanks for your visit Andrea and your lovely comments, which I always appreciate - thank you! With kindest thoughts Ann xx