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Super Victimized

Expecting 2 get something special U end up getting part of the 'all' So 2 compensate 4 the loss I remain on the path 4 gloss!

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Karena Brown

Date: 12/10/2008 8:41:00 PM

Congrats Stephen...good to see a fellow Jamaican made it thru. Keep doing what you're doing. :-)

John Heck

Date: 11/30/2008 5:52:00 AM

Stephen - Congratulations on your poem making Round One of the PSoup poetry contest! Wishing you all the best in the finals and have a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John

Sharon Winter

Date: 11/11/2008 8:50:00 AM

Congrats on making it through to the first round! Good luck in the finals! Love, Shar

Michael Jordan

Date: 11/1/2008 7:30:00 PM

Stephen - Congrats on your poetry making it through to the next round – Great Job & God Bless

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/28/2008 10:40:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round. Good luck in the finals. Love, Carol

Christopher Higgins

Date: 10/26/2008 1:40:00 PM

Congrats my fellow "yardie" with making it through the first round

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/22/2008 2:42:00 PM

Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol

Date: 10/22/2008 7:16:00 AM

This poem brings back childhood memories when we wrote numbers for words, thinking we were quite clever. You took the idea to a new level here. Love the message of line 2. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing! Karen

Michael Jordan

Date: 10/19/2008 9:38:00 PM

Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week Stephen - God Bless

Sharon Winter

Date: 10/19/2008 4:42:00 PM

Congratulations Stephen on your featured write of the week. Love, Shar