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Super Victimized

Expecting 2 get something special
U end up getting part of the 'all'
So 2 compensate 4 the loss
I remain on the path 4 gloss!

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Karena Brown

December 10, 2008 at 8:41 PM

Congrats Stephen...good to see a fellow Jamaican made it thru. Keep doing what you're doing. :-)

John Heck

November 30, 2008 at 5:52 AM

Stephen - Congratulations on your poem making Round One of the PSoup poetry contest! Wishing you all the best in the finals and have a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John

Sharon Winter

November 11, 2008 at 8:50 AM

Congrats on making it through to the first round! Good luck in the finals! Love, Shar

Michael Jordan

November 1, 2008 at 7:30 PM

Stephen - Congrats on your poetry making it through to the next round – Great Job & God Bless

Carol Sunshine Brown

October 28, 2008 at 10:40 AM

Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round. Good luck in the finals. Love, Carol

Christopher Higgins

October 26, 2008 at 1:40 PM

Congrats my fellow "yardie" with making it through the first round

Carol Sunshine Brown

October 22, 2008 at 2:42 PM

Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol

October 22, 2008 at 7:16 AM

This poem brings back childhood memories when we wrote numbers for words, thinking we were quite clever. You took the idea to a new level here. Love the message of line 2. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing! Karen