Super Mum

Woman
Super powers
Rushing, fussing, fixing
Listens. Somehow always caring.
Mother

motherwomencinquain

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Julia Ward

August 15, 2015 at 3:42 AM

You create good imagery of movement in your poem. Kind regards, Julia

Laura Hay

August 8, 2016 at 2:51 PM

Thank you for your kind comments Julia! :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

July 6, 2015 at 7:57 AM

Weeeeee every good mom is a superwoman!!!!loving sweet poem!~Olive ELoisa

Laura Hay

July 6, 2015 at 8:42 AM

Much appreciated, thanks for stopping by. Warm Rgds, Laura

Afolabi Muideen

June 29, 2015 at 4:18 AM

A sweet and elegantly write. I love it..............A.M.

Laura Hay

July 6, 2015 at 8:41 AM

Thank you so much for your kind words! Rgds Laura

Casarah Nance

June 28, 2015 at 8:46 AM

That is a very nice cinquain, great combination of all the great attributes to a mom ;)

Laura Hay

June 28, 2015 at 4:34 PM

Thank you for your kind comments Casarah, warm Rgds Laura

Paul Callus

June 26, 2015 at 6:12 AM

Short but most lovely tribute to a 'super' mum. Combining work with being a mother is not easy. Unfortunately many mothers are taken for granted, even though they possess no magic wand! Regards...paul

Laura Hay

June 26, 2015 at 4:34 PM

Thanks Paul, it was a wee try a new form of poetry for me this time, easier to chose a subject close to home, warm Rgds Laura

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