Super Mum

Woman Super powers Rushing, fussing, fixing Listens. Somehow always caring. Mother

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Julia Ward

Date: 8/15/2015 3:42:00 AM

You create good imagery of movement in your poem. Kind regards, Julia

Laura Hay
Date: 8/8/2016 2:51:00 PM

Thank you for your kind comments Julia! :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 7/6/2015 7:57:00 AM

Weeeeee every good mom is a superwoman!!!!loving sweet poem!~Olive ELoisa

Laura Hay
Date: 7/6/2015 8:42:00 AM

Much appreciated, thanks for stopping by. Warm Rgds, Laura

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 6/29/2015 4:18:00 AM

A sweet and elegantly write. I love it..............A.M.

Laura Hay
Date: 7/6/2015 8:41:00 AM

Thank you so much for your kind words! Rgds Laura

Casarah Nance

Date: 6/28/2015 8:46:00 AM

That is a very nice cinquain, great combination of all the great attributes to a mom ;)

Laura Hay
Date: 6/28/2015 4:34:00 PM

Thank you for your kind comments Casarah, warm Rgds Laura

Paul Callus

Date: 6/26/2015 6:12:00 AM

Short but most lovely tribute to a 'super' mum. Combining work with being a mother is not easy. Unfortunately many mothers are taken for granted, even though they possess no magic wand! Regards...paul

Laura Hay
Date: 6/26/2015 4:34:00 PM

Thanks Paul, it was a wee try a new form of poetry for me this time, easier to chose a subject close to home, warm Rgds Laura