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We can speak an entire conversation for hours without a word being said With each rhythmic movement We create waterfalls Like snowflakes falling down All around us I am practicing my martial arts Since first I saw you No one will take you away from me It was your hair Long, flowing, gently rising above Your shoulders as a slight breeze Pass through, coupled with a coy glance sending infatuating Permanent portraits in my brain Subliminal mind binding must be a hobby The only thing I can reason is you are my everything Alone, not anymore As I gaze in this antique mirror called my soul I can finally dust it off Finally witnessing love up and close Some may say you are just lovestruck But does it strike so many times per day My heart has been whipped into shape More than these two golden rings Before you there were none and after you there will be no more She has me thinking beyond the now Finally I am here, arrived at happiness point And now my heart is pounding too hard against my chest Threatening to take my life before I get to see twenty five father’s day ties Bum-giddy-bum, bum-giddy-bum I am resuscitated Lord, thank you for defibrillators Now I get to spend my second lifetime with her Without any fussing I promise to kiss your photo a thousand times, and then walk one thousand miles And ride in a van filled with the Taliban And cross state lines With an illegal immigrant out of Arizona Feet covered with sand To prove there is no getting away from me So, why ask am I the one? You are my only I have laid down the clues I have relinquished everything My desire for you is the length of coast to coast You have unlocked everything good in me There is no one else This lady with character I would not trade you for anything, not for a girl who calls for fun Likes to run to the party scenes or even to play in the sun Even if I was the sun or if And all the lost treasures under the seas were offered in exchange I would not need it because I have already found a rare priceless pearl

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/6/2010 6:52:00 PM
After reading both parts I and II....I am so impressed with the emotion and description of your writing. Sorry, not to have found these before now! I will be watching out for more of your poetry. After being away for several days, I am so pleased you have found my "If For Instance" worthy in your Is She The One contest, thank you very much, Tavaras! I am honored! Thanks again....Carrie
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Date: 7/31/2010 11:03:00 AM
Thanks, Linda. Wow! I am excitied. I am having the items forwarded to me in Louisiana. I thought I would have been back home by in Miami by now.
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Date: 7/29/2010 2:51:00 PM
Have u received your items as yet? please let me know Tavarus... with luv..
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Date: 7/24/2010 4:53:00 PM
What an exciting flair u have Tavarus.. your words are interesting and u have a 'no holds barred' attitude which seeps through in every line... this part speaks volumes ... and u create waterfalls... superb line.. so much meaning in this part.. enjoyed ..with luv..
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Date: 7/23/2010 5:42:00 PM
Thanks Matt. Glad you enjoyed it.
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Date: 7/21/2010 5:41:00 PM
I'm impressed. Atleast I'll know who is challenging me in that contest. Good Luck!!! Looking forward to it
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