Super Bowl

Scrimmage upended linemen Super bowl Sunday The crowd roared, foot ball sailed high. Receiver zig-zagged down field, Ball spun overhead, Runner snatched in air— touch down!

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/2/2012 8:05:00 PM

Hello James... I'm waiting for the super bowl... being from Texas, i cheer for the cowboys,, and the H TEXANS... LOL.... sad the Cowboys, slipped this year to many times...I better go check tonight score... thanks for the reminder... always~ PD

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/3/2011 2:31:00 PM

College football am just getting into James.. pro football is a passion of mine.. when the season starts, hopefully there will not be a lockout, we will discuss more luv..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/3/2011 7:31:00 AM

Hi James, forgot to wish you success in this contest. The Oklahoma Sooners is a college team so they never play the pro team - Green Bay Packers, winners of the 2011 Super Bowl. Thanks for stopping by with you comments. Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/3/2011 6:58:00 AM

I am enjoying reading the many diverse poems written by the many wonderful poets writing and sharing here at PoetrySoup today. I am happy that yours was among the ones I had the pleasure to read James. The best to you if this is for Royal's contest. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/2/2011 4:11:00 PM

Seven easy points James.. and I sure do miss football season already.. am a total GIANTS fan living right outside NYC...if u entered this in the contest ..good luck to u .. Royal will luv it.. what's your fav team luv.??

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/2/2011 3:45:00 PM

Are you a football fan too, James? The action you describe so well in your verse really gets the crowd into the game. Go Green Bay Packers! Really enjoyed this one. Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/2/2011 2:44:00 PM

Nice observation of the super bowl, James