Supannika

the very first time I saw you you totally captivated my heart never had any idea or single clue but I’m already in love with you since the start just your name is such a beauty without a doubt I could hardly believe that you’re real until I’ve finally touched and held you one by one falling down from those wand-like branches as in hail carpeting the dark green bermuda grasses on the ground with all my zest I gathered you gladly all around your big round petals shine so bright like a brilliant sun my faint notion that you’re a hand-made crepe paper now has passed its way and finally gone all I wish, when I dance you’ll adorn my hair I’ll be proudly making you into garlands for a special affair in my eyes, you’re one of the emblems of royalty in this beautiful kingdom and lovely place while local and foreign folks are all enjoying their stay you’re providing them an atmosphere with solace in your yellow color is a shaft of light for peace Supannika, with my piquancy I am taking you home to introduce you that you’re such a special kind a radiant flower to float on water will lastly bloom most especially I’ve a great idea in my mind you’ll be a wonderful gift to my loved ones on Valentines Written: Feb. 10, 2012
Second Place Contest: Simple Title Judged: 3/9/13 Poet Sponsor: Greatest Poet PD
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 9/10/2013 4:11:00 PM
Hello My dearest sis... Making my way here... stopping by to view a few of your poems... hugs my lovely sis... Linda
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Date: 3/24/2013 7:41:00 AM
Wonderful poem for Valentine's day, Leonora. I look forward to seeing this flower at some point in my life.
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Date: 3/16/2013 3:09:00 PM
Leonora, congrats on a wonderful win! Love, Kim
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Date: 3/13/2013 9:03:00 PM
Outstanding, Leonora. Congrats. Nice going.Kudos. hugs, Ralph
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Date: 3/10/2013 11:24:00 AM
I too am curious now about the flower. Not sure about the form, for I've never tried it, but your verses are simply lovely. Congrats on your win..
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Date: 3/9/2013 7:22:00 PM
Hello Sweet little Leo, congratulations with the prettiness of your words...always~ LINDA
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Date: 3/5/2013 7:46:00 AM
my sweet Leonora... thank you for this lovely poem... love your Quintain ...love your Supannika :) <3 <3 <3 luv and hugs :) Sk
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Date: 2/18/2013 9:48:00 PM
To be honest quad means 4 as in 4 lines. P. S. What goes up must come down.
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Date: 2/17/2013 3:52:00 PM
hey, I just thought of something. YOu could have entered this one in one of PD's valentine day contests. I think she had two or three. I hope you were in at least one of those contests because you have the heart of a loving valentine!!
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Date: 2/17/2013 8:11:00 AM
What an amazing first attempt. Loved it, if you would have entered into a contest I am sure it would have been a winner.
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Date: 2/17/2013 7:57:00 AM
Leonora, this is amazing, you write of flower, yet how poignant this beautiful poem would be to the one you truly love....
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Date: 2/17/2013 2:56:00 AM
a cute one a wonderful poem, Leonara...
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Date: 2/14/2013 11:43:00 PM
HAPPY HAPPY VALENTINE'S DAY, to a special lady!!
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Date: 2/14/2013 5:18:00 PM
Dear Leonora, You did well! Happy Valentine's Day to you too! Thanks for sharing this. I enjoyed reading it. And thanks also for the visit! Love, Annalise
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Date: 2/14/2013 11:54:00 AM
Lenora; I don't know too much about the different forms of poetry, I just know that this one reads great. It is beautiful. Thanks for sharing and happy Valentine's Day. Lucilla
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Date: 2/14/2013 11:49:00 AM
Enjoyable descriptions so richly employed here Leonora; I was captivated by this incredible piece Thank you also for the wonderful comments also wishing you and anyone with you a most happy Valentines day..!
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Date: 2/14/2013 10:26:00 AM
Leonora I love your take on this, I have never heard of this flower but seems like you have done its beauty justice, Happy Valentines to you as well....David
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Date: 2/14/2013 6:44:00 AM
A beautiful poem on this flower.Lovely read Leonora.
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Date: 2/14/2013 5:13:00 AM
Wow...awesome write there :-)
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Date: 2/13/2013 1:56:00 PM
Great work describing this favorite flower of yours..It is fun researching out a new plant and finding the name that goes with it..Thanks for stopping by..I am honored that you faved my poem..Sara
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Date: 2/13/2013 2:58:00 AM
nice job
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Date: 2/12/2013 9:17:00 PM
Hello Leo, stopping by to say GOOD-MORNING... lol.. although it's night here.. But, i have a feeling you will wake soon.. if not already.... xox~PD
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Date: 2/12/2013 7:11:00 PM
Thanks for reading my writes, I have enjoyed yours this evening. Why not post a picture for us in the about the poem part! Light & love
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Date: 2/12/2013 7:22:00 AM
My dearest poetry soup sister.. After reading this poem..I felt the beauty and excitement, ::of when:: you first came across the beauty of this enchanting flower, in which captivate your mind, body and soul... like the sun, the color yellow came to mind. Thank you for introducing this radiant flower, in which is very pretty,,, and yes, I looked up the flower after reading your poem the first time. I too;-) am captivated by the images I found on line. Wish we had this kind of beauty here in Texas. I think the pretties flowers we have here, once a year, are the roses and bonnets. thank you very much for this wonderful and bright image... xox~LINDA
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Date: 2/12/2013 7:12:00 AM
Leo :-)... i love the way you picture painted the beautiful and delicate flower.. Now I know the name of the flowers on your avatar.
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