Sun-Tanned Flesh Burning

sun-tanned flesh burning
cooled by waterways of lake-
dog days lower heat


Haika-haiku Summer 5-7-5
Mick Talbot Contest 
23rd May 2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Breidenthal Avatar
May 28, 2018 at 8:44 AM
Very excellent poem written very well.
Onclaud Avatar
May 25, 2018 at 7:32 PM
sun and coolness brought together to create a nice haiku is awesome, ashley... thanks for coming by.. huggs
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