Sun,Sky,Spirit

Birds in the air, flying with no care
By the yellow god, known as the Sun

Planes filled with brains floating above
I look with my eye at the beautiful Sky

I wonder all day what happens when you die
Heaven or hell, will be the keeper of my Spirit
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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July 22, 2010 at 10:49 AM
Today as I read this piece you have written I am thankful that you have shared it with us. I hope you will present us with more of your poetry in the near future. Don't let your ink dry out. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be Justin. Love, Carol
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