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Sunshine Blackberries

I stop to eat them
so ripe succulent and sweet
darkly delicious

afternoon music
joins the raptures of the hour
golden in all ways
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Michael Avatar
June 30, 2020 at 12:36 PM
I like the first one...It could mean a lot...Well done
Buehler Avatar
June 30, 2020 at 12:38 PM
Especially if you're hot and thirsty. Thank you very much.
Leffanta Avatar
June 29, 2020 at 1:45 PM
Blackberries are very nutritious - if you can get to them before birds and animals. Too many pricks discourage women! Aloha! Rico
Buehler Avatar
June 29, 2020 at 5:58 PM
Thank you for your thoughts, Rico. I completely agree. Aloha! :)
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