Sunshine Blackberries

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I stop to eat them so ripe succulent and sweet darkly delicious afternoon music joins the raptures of the hour golden in all ways

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Arturo Michael

Date: 6/30/2020 12:36:00 PM

I like the first one...It could mean a lot...Well done

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 6/30/2020 12:38:00 PM

Especially if you're hot and thirsty. Thank you very much.

Rico Leffanta

Date: 6/29/2020 1:45:00 PM

Blackberries are very nutritious - if you can get to them before birds and animals. Too many pricks discourage women! Aloha! Rico

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 6/29/2020 5:58:00 PM

Thank you for your thoughts, Rico. I completely agree. Aloha! :)