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Sunshine and Smile

Sunshine comes from heaven, breaking up clouds in the sky, and dispelling the winter coldness to land the world a Spring The smiling comes from eyes, breaking up gloom in the heart, and bringing warmth to put on the Sunshine additional bright (syllables 28 and 28 in each unit )

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 9/7/2019 6:19:00 PM

Hello Xuefeng Pan, you have out done yourself in this poem. have a nice evening my friend,

Xuefeng Pan
Date: 9/7/2019 11:10:00 PM

Thanks, Darlene! Best wishes to you and your family for everything! Sincerely Xuefeng Pan

Ann Foster

Date: 8/19/2019 9:00:00 AM

Truly beautiful my friend. This is now in my favorites. A lovely day full of bright color and great smells... Ann

Xuefeng Pan
Date: 8/19/2019 9:33:00 AM

Thanks a lot, Ann. I have to admit that I feel being honoured... I thank you very much indeed again...Best wishes to you for your encouragement! Have a very nice day! Xuefeng