Sunshine

What makes you who you are. Things I want to know more and more. On my mind like a 
broken record. Over and over again I see your smile, hear your voice, smell your scent. I 
am under your spell and have locked the door and swallowed the key. A willing prisoner to 
your essence even without your presence. Smile sunshine smile. 

I hang eagerly on every word that flows like silk out of plump cherry lips.  Firm hips that talk 
when you move. Thoughts I can't lose. They are forever with me. Touched by the sun dipped 
in honey and kissed by God's light. Shine sunshine shine.

Your eyes hold deep secrets like pure oceans and with one wave carry men to the deepest 
brink. With childlike innocence I swim in the deep. If I drown I do with sunshine chained 
around my neck. Like a deer thirsting for water I yearn to take a long drink of her wine. 
Drink till I am drunk. Hung over after every hello dieing after every goodbye. Sunshine.

Extraordinary light that reflects from your style, mind, body and soul. I cherish the day you 
illuminated my life. Sunshine.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 12/16/2010 11:47:00 AM
do you want my honest oppinion? jhl
Login to Reply
Date: 12/16/2010 9:35:00 AM
Tommy! This is very good. Keep up the deternination to be a professional poet and get published. Do Not neglect your writing skills. Read Others, Define your skill and Improve on your writing everday. Cpaige6
Login to Reply
Date: 12/16/2010 3:32:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Tommy. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also. Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 12/15/2010 8:34:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight.. hope your time on the Soup will be fun and filled with sharing.. check out the contests too.. good luck with luv..
Login to Reply
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Reflection on the Important Things

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter
Hide Ad