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What makes you who you are. Things I want to know more and more. On my mind like a broken record. Over and over again I see your smile, hear your voice, smell your scent. I am under your spell and have locked the door and swallowed the key. A willing prisoner to your essence even without your presence. Smile sunshine smile. I hang eagerly on every word that flows like silk out of plump cherry lips. Firm hips that talk when you move. Thoughts I can't lose. They are forever with me. Touched by the sun dipped in honey and kissed by God's light. Shine sunshine shine. Your eyes hold deep secrets like pure oceans and with one wave carry men to the deepest brink. With childlike innocence I swim in the deep. If I drown I do with sunshine chained around my neck. Like a deer thirsting for water I yearn to take a long drink of her wine. Drink till I am drunk. Hung over after every hello dieing after every goodbye. Sunshine. Extraordinary light that reflects from your style, mind, body and soul. I cherish the day you illuminated my life. Sunshine.

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Date: 12/16/2010 11:47:00 AM
do you want my honest oppinion? jhl
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Date: 12/16/2010 9:35:00 AM
Tommy! This is very good. Keep up the deternination to be a professional poet and get published. Do Not neglect your writing skills. Read Others, Define your skill and Improve on your writing everday. Cpaige6
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Date: 12/16/2010 3:32:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Tommy. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/15/2010 8:34:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight.. hope your time on the Soup will be fun and filled with sharing.. check out the contests too.. good luck with luv..
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