Sunshine

door ajar
a finger of sunshine
slips in
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Dietrich Avatar
May 16, 2026 at 7:13 PM
Ohhh good one at Brian's blog
Achara Avatar
May 16, 2026 at 7:34 PM
Thank you. It is one of my favorites.
Green Avatar
October 13, 2021 at 11:53 AM
Nice, I can picture this clearly. Nicely done.
Achara Avatar
October 13, 2021 at 1:36 PM
Thank you
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 13, 2021 at 11:07 AM
Hello Chetta, with the door a jar ithe sunshine will brighten a dull room up. enjoy your day my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 13, 2021 at 3:24 PM
Hello Chetta, I hope you had a good day. enjoy your evening my friend.
Achara Avatar
October 13, 2021 at 1:36 PM
Thank you
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