Sunsetting After Storms

ruptured skies embrace
shooting stars as violet seeps
into seams of earth 

as sunlight retreats
into milky ways across a
constellation night
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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September 28, 2026 at 7:51 AM
I've really been enjoying your poem and the emotions and imagery were so vivid that i could easily picture them as beautiful illustration. I'm a commission-based manga/webtoon artist,and I’d love to discuss the possibility of bringing this poem to life if you're ever interested. Feel free to reach out at gm@il : akiracomicart2@ or on inst@: akiraa_artly
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April 12, 2016 at 12:36 PM
jennifer c, you've expressed yourself well, I enjoyed your poem. Love LINDA :)
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August 30, 2015 at 2:57 PM
JENNIFER, Great piece to read today, Well done ~SKAT~
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September 8, 2012 at 7:17 AM
Lovely haiku Jennifer - well done ! - // Anne-Lise :)
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September 8, 2012 at 5:30 AM
beautiful, Jennifer.
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