Sunsets At 35 Almseda Place

Who was I to know,that summer on my roof, inhaling plants of unknown roots.
These things would take me on a journey many do not wish too see.
Escape was always the plan,crutches carrying me for life.they say
however my spirit always prays.For as long as I will too open my eyes,to see
the sunsets on many plains,they're still is life and hope inside of me.
The concrete oasis in the asphalt,shows a dandelion of sunray,so I do stay
my sunsets on Almseda St. never sways.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2006

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June 1, 2013 at 8:41 PM
Rebecca, congratulations on having your poem Featured this past week. It was nice reading your poem tonight... Linda
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June 1, 2013 at 9:13 AM
I kept hearing hints of Jimmy Hendrix as I read this. I'm not sure why. But, this was fantastic! Quite the trip! :)
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