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Sunset With Pelicans

Three did down upon a line,
Three loop once for surprise,
Five more
     then six were Southward bound
Now five onto a glide
Then one last one
    another loop did.

The sun popped out a lushish hue,
A line upon the sea it drew,
Three more decided to fly by
As worlds reflect within each eye,
The sun then lazily lingered,
One did wait for two.

The visions began as two didn't land,
Another day sofend over
As the road beneith over passed,
Four this time were the last,
Homeward bound I seemed to be,
Home again from the sea.
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/9/2012 11:51:00 AM
A fine write :-)
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