Poet Destroyer A Poet Haiku

Sunset Vs' Sunrise

SUNSET  vs'  SUNRISE 

** Sunset **
The afterglow flame 
Creeping under the cold creek 
Daylight, gone again

** Soap Dish **
Daytime TV blues
Tune in tomorrows soap box
Dramatic, dusk wind

** Evening Star **
Tired sound waves 
Waiting for eventfulness 
Hour of the beast

** Atmospheric **
Phenomenon Light
Under the zodiacal night 
Kisses and shivers 

** Twilight **
Locked in my slumber
Vampire face awaken 
Thirst like no other 
 
** Sundown **
Aurora fading 
What goes up, has to come down
crowfeet, black and white  
__________________________

~~ Tequila Sunrise ~~
Break of day, snooze 
Cockcrow without a whisper 
Coyote Ugly

~~ DAWN ~~
Same Situation 
Mentally agonizing;
Sunny side egg twist

~~ New Moon ~~
beautiful sun rays 
Sun awaits for ebony 
beautiful moonbeam 

~~ Adjust the Setting ~~
Breathtaking sunrise
Beyond the horizon sky
Sherbert colored beach 

~~ Skipping Rocks ~~
Glitter dusk on lids
Birds sing me a lullaby 
Kids playing by lake

~~ Sunrise Industry ~~
Shining superstar 
Golden streets with no stop sign
Lunch time draws nearer 

by;p.d.

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Andrea Dietrich January 12, 2018 at 7:48 PM Remember when you did this long series of KU!!! I just loved it when you had us do haiku and other fun contest ideas. I came way back here to say thanks for your wonderful comments. I really do hope you will take my advice and write poems for contests. I would rarely write if not for that motivation. Luv, Andrea

Robin Davis May 6, 2014 at 9:19 PM PD This is a very creative and unique string of poetry. Each one different but descriptive and fun in their own way. Thank you for the nice comment on my Poetry poem.

Skat A August 20, 2013 at 9:14 PM awesome.... The Skat

S.Jagathsimhan Nair August 20, 2013 at 9:53 AM A lovely string of haikus, congrats on the fine win!!

Poet Destroyer A August 19, 2013 at 5:06 PM Thank you very much for the win... lovely Leonora... xox~ Linda

Shadow Hamilton August 18, 2013 at 4:00 PM most inventive Linda congrats on your win Shadow x smile

Richard Lamoureux August 18, 2013 at 8:40 AM This is brilliant, the one form that eludes me and you write a chain of them. Congratulations.

Joseph May August 18, 2013 at 8:32 AM congrats on a great win with these awesome Haiku Linda

Len Gasun August 18, 2013 at 4:52 AM Hello my everdearest sis! You really surprised me with your super amazing entry.Thank you, thank you ever so much! Biggest hugs! Congratulations on your well-deserved first place win with this spectacular & outstanding poem! I extremely love every haiku in its chain and so enjoyed. Thank you so much as well for your full support my dearest greatest poet & loving sis. Have a blessed day! Big hugs & kisses! Love m4ever, Leonora

Justin Bordner August 1, 2013 at 3:32 PM An amazing dream sequence PD. - a real liberation in this passionate writing style - I supose its all a matter of reflection my Sphinx - J.A.B. %

Shadow Hamilton June 17, 2013 at 10:51 AM excellent chain Linda each a jewel in its own right love it Shadow x

Len Gasun January 10, 2013 at 9:32 AM All excellent/outstanding chain of Haiku's by my only forever greatest poet and sis Linda! Thank you so much my dearest sis and friend for sharing all your stellar masterpieces and everything! love you much forever, Leonora

Harry Horsman December 30, 2012 at 5:03 AM oh boy these are so good, tell me Linda, why does one with so much talent now here with you and those like you in past history, want to destroy everthing they have created, in your case beautiful poetry, and remember this,, the amount of joy you give to one's like me.. is amazing, but when you fall we all fall, that is the power you wield~~~~~~~~

Jack Horne July 1, 2012 at 10:32 AM lovely haiku, PD. Have a good weekend : )

Mitch White May 14, 2012 at 1:02 AM I love the rendition you got here, I wish you could put it (condense) into a single Haiku,, but I guess that's the supper secret formula. Whenever you come round- I get a good feeling. I guess I just love u babe! FOR U- My very own flapjack empress.. that constantly shows me her joy.. If we ever were to meet- would it ever be as good as this? Heaven only knows. I actually have your number in my phone, only it's under your real name.. which I can't recall - loll. I believe it's starts with an S ??? Anyhow I long to t to you. ):}

Debbie Guzzi November 28, 2011 at 6:25 PM of course you MUST use the animals name because the animal IS the season word! :)

Karen Price November 26, 2011 at 4:06 AM Beautiful haiku's. Thanks for reading mine and making a comment.

Suzanne C. Goudreau November 14, 2011 at 8:39 PM Wow, what a creative writer...and so excellently executed. Lovely imagery, wonderful thoughts, a delight of passion and true choice of words. You are a master! Truly enjoyed these. Million thx for sharing.

Caryl Muzzey November 14, 2011 at 12:47 PM A wonderful list of Haikus P.D., you have definitely got them covered, I enjoyed the read~ Caryl

Daver Austin November 13, 2011 at 11:05 AM You got those crow's feet on your eyeballs, p.d. Your Haiku are totally stimulating. Love, daver

Kabuteng P.Ink K. November 13, 2011 at 8:30 AM ooh, really enjoyed your sunrise and sunset haiku! So cool and I still feel bad I missed on sunset contest-- enjoyed each one of these haiku! dawn one with the sunny side up was fun! and haha you're funny, of course bomb doesn't rhyme with heart! I wanted to put in there "fart" --THAT rhymes with heart ;) since sweet potatoes make you fart, right? hahahah :D

Michael J. Falotico November 13, 2011 at 7:27 AM You have the honor now of being the Queen of Haiku!!! What a flow and yes as stated below "epic"... wondeful work as only your sweet mind and fingers can create... MJF

David William Breidenthal November 11, 2011 at 2:26 AM =) THIS IS A TRUE HAIKU! I love how you made this whole poem--it's epic!! (DWB)

Andrea Dietrich November 10, 2011 at 9:49 PM Irma, you got it now, didn't you? Took me about 40 minutes! ARe you saying the Soup closed your contest for having more than one contest going on at the same time? I could have sworn two hours ago that there were plenty of spots left on sneaky ninja! WAs I wrong about that? And I hope Top of the world contest didn't get removed, did it?

Debbie Guzzi November 10, 2011 at 2:17 PM a very active mind! light & love

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