Sunset Sea

Sunset Sea Dusk draws very near As the waves slowly recede Beneath painted skies

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Caryl Muzzey

Date: 3/10/2010 8:46:00 AM

A wonderful Haiku, congratulations on your win. Caryl

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 2/17/2010 11:37:00 PM

Awesome! Congrats on your win in this contest. Best wishes, Caroline.

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 2/16/2010 3:22:00 PM

very very nice Edward. Congrats on a great win!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/16/2010 1:05:00 PM

Pretty haiku, Edward. Congrats for your third place!! luv, andrea

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 2/16/2010 5:28:00 AM

Congratulations Edward, on your success in Raul’s “Seascapes” poetry contest with this creative haiku with such beautiful words to match the picture. Your poem is outstanding. Keep the winning words flowing! Smiles, Dane Ann

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/16/2010 5:22:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's Seascape contest Edward. Love,Carol

Audrey Haick

Date: 2/15/2010 7:57:00 PM

My congratulations to you, Edward, on you 3rd Place Win in the "Seascapes" Contest! Great work! Peace, Audrey

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/15/2010 5:31:00 PM

Nicely done....and well deserving this honor! :) Congratulations

Margaret Foster

Date: 2/15/2010 4:32:00 PM

Nice reading Edward, well done...Margaret

Raul Moreno

Date: 2/15/2010 2:17:00 PM

Edward, congratulations on placing third in my contest...Raul

Susan Palli

Date: 2/14/2010 8:20:00 AM

love the scenery

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/14/2010 1:15:00 AM

I think this made a great entry, Edward!

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 2/13/2010 8:13:00 PM

Awesome Haiku! Good luck on the contest. Thanks for sharing. Caroline.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/13/2010 8:50:00 AM

Excellent descriptive Haiku that you have penned in this one. If it is for the contest should be in the winner's circle. Good luck. Sara

Eleanore Bourner

Date: 2/13/2010 5:58:00 AM

beautiful imagery in this haiku. keep it up! ------Ell