Sunset Sea

Sunset Sea

Dusk draws very near
As the waves slowly recede
Beneath painted skies
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Muzzey Avatar
March 10, 2010 at 8:46 AM
A wonderful Haiku, congratulations on your win. Caryl
Delacroix Avatar
February 17, 2010 at 11:37 PM
Awesome! Congrats on your win in this contest. Best wishes, Caroline.
Dufresne Avatar
February 16, 2010 at 3:22 PM
very very nice Edward. Congrats on a great win!
Dietrich Avatar
February 16, 2010 at 1:05 PM
Pretty haiku, Edward. Congrats for your third place!! luv, andrea
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
February 16, 2010 at 5:28 AM
Congratulations Edward, on your success in Raul’s “Seascapes” poetry contest with this creative haiku with such beautiful words to match the picture. Your poem is outstanding. Keep the winning words flowing! Smiles, Dane Ann
Brown Avatar
February 16, 2010 at 5:22 AM
Congratulations on your win in Raul's Seascape contest Edward. Love,Carol
Haick Avatar
February 15, 2010 at 7:57 PM
My congratulations to you, Edward, on you 3rd Place Win in the "Seascapes" Contest! Great work! Peace, Audrey
Richards Avatar
February 15, 2010 at 5:31 PM
Nicely done....and well deserving this honor! :) Congratulations
Foster Avatar
February 15, 2010 at 4:32 PM
Nice reading Edward, well done...Margaret
Moreno Avatar
February 15, 2010 at 2:17 PM
Edward, congratulations on placing third in my contest...Raul
Palli Avatar
February 14, 2010 at 8:20 AM
love the scenery
Dietrich Avatar
February 14, 2010 at 1:15 AM
I think this made a great entry, Edward!
Delacroix Avatar
February 13, 2010 at 8:13 PM
Awesome Haiku! Good luck on the contest. Thanks for sharing. Caroline.
Kendrick Avatar
February 13, 2010 at 8:50 AM
Excellent descriptive Haiku that you have penned in this one. If it is for the contest should be in the winner's circle. Good luck. Sara
Bourner Avatar
February 13, 2010 at 5:58 AM
beautiful imagery in this haiku. keep it up! ------Ell
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